Bluelines to Inks

[Fourth Nail]

My first 2D work in progross here. I need some work on the knee pad on the right leg. Any crits, more than welcome pleeeeez!

http://www.frogmencomics.com/conceptart/blueline1.jpg

Z

[metalwinds]

haha, looks like a crocodile crocodile hunter. his left arm is doofy looking and i dont really like the gun.... . .its perspective is off too. nice drawing though

[Chaser226]

He has abit too much weight on his right, so looks like hes tipping over a bit. Great linework though I love it.:rolleyes:

[mtomczek]

lookin alright, few things that i noticed. First his lower region is out of proportion for his upper body, the legs look to small and weak for such a large frame. Second, lets see the whole image. Its cropped weird so the image seems crammed or cluttered, keep that figure the main focus, open it up a bit. and third, I agree with his weight distribution. He feels a bit off center, kinda like he is going to fall over. otherwise, keep up the good work, nice effort.

[Fourth Nail]

thanks for all the crits guys, I appreciate it.

1. I'm having some problem seeing the weight issue, can someone draw a line of action over it and show me what you're talking about. I'm just missing it a bit.

2. I'm going to go back and revisit that left arm for sure, it looks too slinky as if there were no bone in it. It bothered me when I posted it too.

3. I think the size of the leg issue has to do with the fact that I have the top cargo pocket and the knee pads down too low, his waist is actually right behind the center of the weapon and I didn't pull it off right. Great observation, much grass.

4. Thanks for the line compliment, that means a lot.

Z