Free Your Mind And Your Ass Will Follow

[starslight]

Good day, just looking for some crits and comments, always looking for ways to improve.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b56/olditalian/kungfoo.jpg


http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b56/olditalian/drac.jpg


And some life drawing:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b56/olditalian/lifedraw1.jpg


http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b56/olditalian/lifedraw2.jpg

[ApolloNuevo]

well looks like a good start. everything is very light in the value department though, i would work to create a wider value range in your renderings.

-apollo

[starslight]

Thanks for the quick reply Apollo. I agree about the renderings I feel as though I'm not as loose when I do my renderings.. it is something I need to experiment with.

Here is a test animation (make sure your volume is on):

This should fix it... you just gotta follow the link (thanks for the heads up maknien) (http://www.geocities.com/mynameismattharper/index.htm)

I apologize for the shit compression but bandwidth was an issue...

[maknien]

Hello there. Good start. Very nice style on those faces. Haven't ruined them looking for realism.
The animation (i mean geocities) didn't work when i tried.
I would like to see you post more. Please :)

[starslight]

Maknien- thanks for the compliement!

Just a small update, and as always all crits and comments are welcome:

photo ref'd:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b56/olditalian/jumboshrimp.jpg


this was almost nostalgic for me:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b56/olditalian/birdie.jpg



-thanks for looking

[Qxzi]

Like your faces here star, good highlights in the hair.

I think you do studies and lots of drawings from life. Keep on postin

[starslight]

A quick life drawing update (2 min gestures):

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b56/olditalian/lifedraw_1.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b56/olditalian/lifedraw_2.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b56/olditalian/lifedraw3.jpg

-thanks for looking!