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battlemonkey
April 8th, 2003, 01:23 AM
u guys scare the hell out of me, but i gotta learn, hard ass crits please~ one day i'll be up there in your quality!

http://www.battlemonkey.com/cat_lady.jpg

http://www.battlemonkey.com/black_claw_lady.jpg

i wish i could draw women with the grace others can do...
Crunch
April 8th, 2003, 01:53 AM
good stuff...hot fems that could kick my ass...hmmmmm...anyway..only crit is the girls look a bit bubbly..by that i mean it seems like they dont have structure to them. like they are just skin and fatty stuff.. the first one not so much as the second..the first one it is the legs. they dont look like they have bones in them...the calf muscle would be more evident in the first one.
the second womans ribcage is non existant...she is hot but the stomach is funny looking. there would be some sort of a curve to it... and the butt doesnt bubble up that much the sides are actually kinda flat...
i have alot of trouble with anatomy myself but they seriously look good. esp the costumes. the hips on the first cat like chick is nice . keep it up man i would like to see more
MolvaDo
April 9th, 2003, 12:01 AM
Ha that is funny as hell the first chic looks like she down wit the dog pound or some shit like that. What up Dre' break'em off sumthin' HELL YEA!
Oolong Boartusker
April 9th, 2003, 01:16 AM
Nice pics. There are two things I noticed. First, on the top picture the girls head looks a little squarish on top instead of round. Not sure if that is what you are going for or not. If the mask is skin tight I would think that it would be rounder up top since it would conform to the shape of the skull.

Second, not sure what it is, but something about the second girls face is not quite right. Other than that great pic's. :)
battlemonkey
April 9th, 2003, 02:36 PM
thanks for the comments/crits
Crunch* geez... i never realized about the "bubbly" thing... now that u say it, i can see it clear as day! and as for her butt, yeah, it wouldnt be pushed up like that~ see thats why i love this place!
Molvado* :D that wasnt my intent, but i can see it~ ha ha
Oolong Boartusker* yeah.. the first girls head... i messed up while drawing it, and i couldnt erase on it due to the paper and my ink, and for the second girl... i think her left eye is too far awar from her nose
thanks for the comments guys, and thanks again for not holding back!

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