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glenkorr
October 10th, 2005, 06:32 PM
I have done with this one, I have tested some new brushes on it. I want to start something new so I stop here.

here the result

http://www.rodriguepralier.com/stockage/monster02.jpg



Hello,

here is the sketch for my next color illustration.

Like my Thor (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?p=607520#post607520) I will share the wip to have comments.

http://www.rodriguepralier.com/stockage/creature01.jpg
glenkorr
October 12th, 2005, 09:52 PM
I'm cherching the colors and the light.....I have a very long way in front of me.

here's the beginning

http://www.rodriguepralier.com/stockage/beast_02.jpg
JERI
October 12th, 2005, 10:15 PM
Damn that's a good face. The color face feels much cleaner and defined than the lineart face. Will be interested to see how you handle the rest of his body as well.
dogfood
October 13th, 2005, 10:55 AM
I probably should have said this earlier, but the fact that every body part leans left just pushes him way off-balance. There should be some aspect which counters that lean (perhaps the front arm).

I'm digging the early colored version.
glenkorr
October 13th, 2005, 07:26 PM
after a discussion with a friend Nezu yukiko (http://www.nezuyukiko.com/) I made changes based on her advices. Thanks to her my illustration is taking a new direction, and a good one :)

http://www.rodriguepralier.com/stockage/beast_03.jpg
madster
October 13th, 2005, 07:38 PM
Dogfood's right.
It leans too far over, and doesn't look dynamic, as much as off-balance.

~M
glenkorr
October 13th, 2005, 10:37 PM
last changed for tonight, will work on it tomorrow night.

http://www.rodriguepralier.com/stockage/beast_04.jpg
dogfood
October 14th, 2005, 06:08 AM
Well, changing the hand position actually solves the lean problem; not becuase it makes the creature look balanced, but now the whole scene looks tilted (not necessarily a bad thing). With the fact that's the thing's reaching toward us, it gets the viewer involved a little more.

I'm really liking the jungley feel.
madster
October 14th, 2005, 10:50 AM
It also makes the piece come to life...Now that thing is a movin' in my direction, reachin' out, and I want to back up!

Excellent change, really improved this piece!

~M