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Andrius
April 7th, 2003, 11:00 PM
Something I just completed for the upcoming game Savage by S2games.

http://24.81.24.76/savage2.jpg

C&C more than welcome

Andrius
April 7th, 2003, 11:05 PM
after looking through this forum and all the amazing artwork out here it's depressing coming back and looking at this image lol. It'll be a while before I post another ;)

DarkORB
April 8th, 2003, 01:19 AM
ack! that's so sad that you would say that! :p I have 2 fast critiques if you don't mind: define a definite light source and add some shadows or stronger highlights (like under the chin and on the arms). it's lacking a bit of depth. and see if you can brighten up the skin.

I like it a lot though. much better then I can do. good pose and porportions.

R_M
April 8th, 2003, 01:21 AM
Hi Andrius,
your line work is fine, but the coloring is a bit to flat. you should work a bit on the shadow areas to give more sense of 3D and from where the light is comming.
the face is nice, but you should work on your hands (they are hard to do right!)
I like the color line across her body, but it is to week and is really hard to see, you should highlight it more...

BoBo_the_seal
April 9th, 2003, 08:53 AM
Hey andrius,
heh, I'm doing a little work for Savage as well. I've been contracted to do some character modeling and skinning. The project is fantastic.

She's looking really good. I would suggest looking more into the hair and play with the lighting on her face to match her arms. Without it she looks a little flat.

Looking forward to seeing more.

- BoBo

Chewy Muntz
April 9th, 2003, 03:54 PM
It looks like you got that pose from a girly magazine. I agree about the light source, don't be afraid to put some strong shadows on her body, even if they aren't in the reference you used.


Muntz

stalecracker
April 9th, 2003, 07:14 PM
It looks EXACTLY like Julie Strain. Is she a part of the game?