trying this again: dsg sketches

[TheDirtSyndicate]

sorry for the x's. thanks to those who actually said something and let me know that there was nothing showing (varithin/coma). and thanks fozz for the help.

c & c welcome.


combine 2 animals togeather into one: i did a bear and a hippo.
http://www.complete2.com/website/newillustrations/bearippo.jpg

girl with a gun:
http://www.complete2.com/website/newillustrations/girl_gun2.jpg

design a robot based of of a modern gun style:
http://www.complete2.com/website/newillustrations/robot14_sketch.jpg

this one was supposed to be environment based, but i misread the topic.
the topic: how would humans survive on the bottom of the ocean.
http://www.complete2.com/website/newillustrations/robot_c.jpg

[TheDirtSyndicate]

are they working? or am i still getting x's?

[Coma]

Na they work now
Nice stuff, I like the hippo-bear thing.

[Fozzybar]

Yes, i can see them!

I like the hippobear, too...a colored version and a more dynamic pose would be cool...

The idea with the gun in its parts is cool

The third...i don't like ;)

The last one reminds me of sparth's bots...

Generally i like that your dsg's are like traditional pencil sketches...in dsg often members (me included) run into problems because they try to render, colorize and do all the stuff to make their skecth look like a half-completed full-time pic...it's not necessary i think...



Oh...and fuck you Coma, it works now...;)

[metalwinds]

i imagine you would like some more criticism, so here it goes

the hippobear thing doesnt really look like a bear... . im seeing more of a gorilla, and the only real reference i see to a hippo is the face. i think you should incorporate more of the hippo into it.. ..but i like anyway.

the gun thing is cool, but the anatomy on the girl is off... . ...her eyes are crooked... . .

the robot thing is a good drawing, but im not really feeling the design

the last one is kinda neat, but i think the design could be worked more

hope this helps some:)

[metaphysiks]

first- the hippo head is sweet, but wheres the bear
2nd- awesome gun, lose the girl
3rd-looking good
4th- the best one on there
the robots are pretty cool, could be modified but could be done too, ur call
keep up the work
chris

[TheDirtSyndicate]

thanks for the comments guys,
i know the proportions are off on the girl with the gun.
it was just a sketch, but i do plan on working on it and making it better.

the robots are something new for me. i've never drawn them before until now. im also working on the designs for a robotic snake.

thanks again

[mtomczek]

not bad, are the boobs to distract us from the gun? :) i like the sketch of the gun bot, very cool. keep it up, and glad to have you involved with the dsg