Cover for a RPG game

[JEIK]

Well here it Goes,
tell me what you think about it guys,
oh and the logo is'nt in the final piece...
I just put it there to fill space

http://jeik.levinux.org/Sketchbook/BrainSoda_cover_01.09.jpg

[vigostar]

Jeik- this looks really great... I really like the way you handled the coloring... Tow things botherme.. first are the eyes of the girls... they dont seem to match.. they just looks like a red dot and a green dot... the other thing that looks weird is that arm thats wrapping around the left leg... the girls right arm is wrapping behind the leg which makes it look like her arm is twisted.. literally.. Maybe bring down the right arm a bit to give it some seperation,... other then that I like it ALOT!!! Probably one of the best if not the best Ive seen from you....

oh and BTW- that girl on the right side has a slamming ASS!!!! Damb.. i just keep on looking at it... thats how you know you did a good job..!

Thanks for sharing...

[Art_Addict]

Looks nice. I agree with the blond girl's arm. It doesn't even look like her's. That could never wrap around the guy's leg like that.

[Artguy]

I like it too. I agree with the comments about the arm, but for me it didn't jump right out.

Make sure the publisher color checks the cover proofs versus your original. The subtle difference between the light and the boys normal skin color could get really washed out by a a bad print prep job. A lot of small press RPG companies don't always do a good job proofing their covers.

Great job though.

[DV8]

cool, comical, I like the style, and still kinda sexy :) (nice bums on the girls)
not sure about the font choice, but overall nice illustration...looks fun :)

thanks for sharing

Mike

[Intec]

oh and BTW- that girl on the right side has a slamming ASS!!!! Damb.. i just keep on looking at it... thats how you know you did a good job..!


I concur...... slammin'.......