first post *update, new pic

[sin]

be gentle, im only 17 years old....and a wuss at that! so think before you tear me to pieces...i dont intend finish this, he's lopsided. I did it like 2 years ago, so blarg.... also i realize the hand on the left is all messed, guess i should fixed that before i inked it, huh :D!

hope this works

(is there anyway to get the actual image to appear in the post?)

http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/504/16846/p/285192_9176476603065778962_vl.jpg

***edit changed link, tell me if it works

[daniela]

I am getting a log in screen when I click on your link.

[Aidan]

sin...cos...tan?
whatever...
comments, when i see a picture.

/e: Well, i pretty like your stuff but i think you shade your pics too less.

[daniela]

It is an interesting concept, but like you said there are several things wrong with it. If this is 2 yrs old, I would be interested in looking at some new works to see if you have made any progress.

[sin]

i havent gotten any better, but thanks for your...help...lol...but ill post some other stuff

this sucks ass too :(
http://www.digitalpose.com/mbr/504/16846/p/285248_2892825041995963722_vl.jpg

took me like an hour and isnt even scanned well...:*(

[Papparazzi]

:) well....yur costume designs and character ideas are great,..yet work on yur darks and lights..the contrast is very imoprtant for it brings in the third dimension into the figure..I'm an amateur myself, but I can tell u that u're on the right track.
.....just a tip...buy some body-building mags or sometin',...it can help u w/yu anatomy work..seriously
good job-keep it up

[sin]

:D

[WildSpruceMoose]

Yes, your costumes and weapons are very cool. It is very good line art, I'd suggest you try and shade maybe colour them a bit to give textures. These are great pictures though and might I add your knowledge of twisted anatomy is good too.

[poly_cube]

the costume isn't that bad - although i can tell your a fan of the anime style (who isn't?) but just be sure to draw in a variety of styles (assuming you want to pursue a career in an art field)

I got burned so many times for drawing anything that remotely looked animish. In the end it helped out I think.

the first pic looks alright and dandy but compared to the second pic i'm not sure how you droped the ball so quickly.

for onehe has 4 fingers? I kinda had the impresion you were going for a realistic touch vs a cartoonish? the body seems to be shifting to his right which is pretty odd. almost seems like he has little legs hehe but anatomy is a hard thing to master. (I really suck at it so i know the pain >_< lol but here is a great website to help you out with it.

http://www.fineart.sk/anat.htm

draw from real life as much as possible- in my old art class we would have to draw 50 pages of life drawing a week (and it really paid off)

i suck but not as much as i did 3 months ago heh