Celeste - Final opinions, major changes?

[Govinda]

HI everyone :)

I'm new to conceptart.org, and this is my first post here.

I have an almost finished piece that, if anyone has time out there, ifyou have any initial thoughts about it, I'd be very thankful to recieve :)

I've gotton mixed opionions on forums like this before, so I'm curious to know what the 'conceptart' public has to say.

Here is the picture:

'Celeste'
Digital

http://www.intotheether.org/images/2003jlbceleste10.jpg

Here is a link if the image above didn't work for any of you ;)
Celeste 10 (http://www.intotheether.org/images/2003jlbceleste10.jpg)


Thanks in advance for any help you may have :)

'Govinda'

[Govinda]

okay, I've made some final changes.

Any opinions anyone may have to finalize this picture would be most welcome :)

http://www.intotheether.org/images/2003jlbceleste11.jpg

[R_M]

Hi Govinda,
interesting concept. I like the hair and the face, but the body feel wrong. there is something with the proportions, but it is rather difficult to point it out cause the weird angle. I think she is to wide, or it is like she is missing the lower part of her body.
the colors are nice, but boy did you choose a difficult position!

[Später]

Very nice!
I think your picture has a lot of atmosphere. And her face and hair is really beautifull... The right foot is a bit off though. I actually found it better in the first picture... But nice color and atmosphere :thumb:

[Tanika]

I love it! You might want to double check her legs/rear. I think something there is wrong, I don't know what that something is, but, I believe it is what RM was trying to point out.
Great concept, I love the shading and skin tones you did. :eek: and you shaded so well too. X.x Her eyes, no, face, is dazzling. Keep it up and check on what I suggested. It is a beautiful work!!!

[Govinda]

Thanks!!! I worked on her foot, and never got a chance to post the change :)

Here is my current version:


http://www.intotheether.org/images/2003jlbceleste12.jpg

HEre is a link if the above image doesn't appear :)
Celeste - 12 (http://www.intotheether.org/images/2003jlbceleste12.jpg)