Belbe Pic (anatomy & proportions)

[NukeouT]

Hello havent posted in a while..

:) Just got the urge to draw something from a book . And possibly refining my photoshop coloring skills along the way..

Im drawing an undead power girl Belbe from MTG nemesis book. Heres probably the best image of her...

http://gamingetc.safeshopper.com/102/678.htm?337

And heres the googlerized super duper, random ref pic I used.

http://www.counterpop.net/~meredith/halloween%202004/03%20pose.jpg

With all that here is what ive done (bodywize) so far.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v315/NukeouT/Belbe.jpg

On the armor I will desighn her some slimm black dimond power armor instead of the tank suit in the pic.

I need help with any mistakes you might spot or somehtin...

[jermainevl]

Her neck is too thick.
Her torso is too small, you should make it longer.
And when you've made her torso longer, you should make the arms longer too, to keep the right proportion.
Her legs should be longer too, and be sure to make the lower leg not as thick as the upper one, which is now the case. Perhaps you should find some more female legs reference.
Unfortunately your reference is a bit unclear; the lower part of her body is too dark to make a good ref.

The position of her shoulders with respect to her tilted head is good in my opinion. Keep it up!