chr!s' journey - Necromancer [01-25-06]

[chr!z]

Hey guys :D

At first i was too afraid and not self-confident enough to open a thread, because all the awesome artists in here.
But finally i made a sketchbook.
I am a pupil of a specialized high school. (field art)
And I have nothing to do better all day long than to draw in school :wink:

(sry for my bad english :bashful: , i'm a stupid ger)

Here are some of my works

http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Klein/alien_small.jpg


http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Klein/Bananenhatz_small.jpg


http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Klein/che_small.jpg


http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Klein/cp_concept_small.jpg


http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Klein/engel_auf_abwegen_small.jpg


http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Klein/gaygladiator_small.jpg


http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Klein/Hellknight_small.jpg


http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Klein/moe_small.jpg


http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Klein/Raven_small.jpg


http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/undead-warrior und spacemarine.JPG


http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Klein/uwarrior-prealpha_small.jpg



If u have any c&c, please post it :rendered:

[Flaskpost]

Really nice pencil work! Keep it up!

[van]

You got a red X on the last one. Really nice stuff. I am glad you finally posted something. Only thing I can see is that you have some anatomy issues here and there. Nothing that can't be solved by doing a few studies.

Keep rockin!

[Gloominati]

wooohoo nochn deutscher ;)

Welcome to CA, dude! Nice new stuff you got here, give us some more, I'll keep an eye on this thread :)

[2000YearsOldMan]

welcome to the site.
nice stuffs, I like the monkeys alot.

[arghmisfit]

hey man, u got some pretty rad stuff here

on stuff like that first one where u shaded the background.. well the background makes it kinda boring, because its just all a single tone.. you can lead the eye better to the focal point if u have lighter tones in the more interesting spots.. plus dark planes of the alien would pop out more against light background, and and vise versa. i dunno just something to play around with

i really like that beast one. composition is looking good on that

seems likes u have a good knowledge of anatomy, just keep working on it

[Eriboss]

great start to a sketchbook!
some really nice sketches- like van said, theres a couple of anatomy issues on a couple, but all in all, some really nice pieces so far!
Look foward to seeing more!

Cheers

Eri :evilmustache:

[chr!z]

Thx for all your posts! :bashful:
And a specially thx to your critics.

@van
Ya, i am workin on it ;)

@Gloominati
Hehe, da fühlt man sich nicht ganz so verloren :D

@arghmisfit
thx mon, you crit help me alot!



Well, here is new stuff from my boring lessons.

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/scribble9.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Knight_of_the_black_rose_small.jpg

[chr!z]

Some more stuff. Please crit!
My biggest problems are faces and anatomy... its so difficlut. :blah:

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/scribbel10.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/scribbel11.jpg

[Onir]

great stuff man, love your pencil work and liking the way you do your faces alot! love the detail on the alien as well.. keep it up!

[dubpsychosis]

I luv your alien....I luv aliens sooooomuch..... :bashful:

I see a lot of really nicely done work, I like the fresh post, those faces are awesome!!! and the skinhead (is it skinhead?) and the girl really rocks!!!!
It seems you get better with every sketch you make...or post :}
the only thing you should do is practice, practice, practice.......yeah I know how it sounds but it's true. I think it works for me.

good luck!

[Azeira]

i like your ability to show both humurous and serious situations. there pretty good, all in all. some anatomy work needed. keep posting.

[Pichuerca]

Great imagination! You have a lot of abilities for concept design

Keep it

Poch

[Danomight]

The side view of the warrior head with the helmet is really nice.

Nice sketches.

[Gloominati]

nice new stuff again, dude. Two things you really have to work on are: 1st Anatomy in general and 2nd dynamic poses(!!) Some of your figures are looking really stiff especially this zomiedude who attacks the girl, it took some time till I even noticed that he was attacking her. Keep at it dude, I will keep on posting :)

[Lovelock]

Well, I like YOUR style too!
Especially zombies. You doin' GREAT zombies..! I would like to see more of your art. Especially new zombies! :eyeloss:

Cant wait for more! Will be here sometimes...
For zombies of course..!

[Nutter]

He He, love that second one. Some cool fantasy stuff here too, just need to watch that anatomy.

PS HAAHAA I just noticed the Gay one, very convincing.

cheers.

[chr!z]

@Onir
thx man, but it doesn't work every time. Some faces are trash and some are better, but i don't show the worst. ^^

@dubpsychosis
Thank u 4 ya post :D
Is it a skinhead? I don't know. I think i dindn't mind it while i was drawing ;)
And yes, i practice as much as i can. But i haven't much time @ the last days.

@Azeira
Live without humor is no life...
Anatomy is much harder then i was expecting. But i try my best :\

@Pichuerca
Conceptdesign is my occupation of dream!

@Danomight
Thx, but unfortunately its incompletely.

@Gloominati
But finally u noticed it ;D
Hmm, in my youth I drew mostly rigid poses. Damn, I have to retrieve so muuuch!

@Lovelock
Thx man! Your praise helps me drawing better pics! Unfortunately my current post participate no zombies... sry :[

@Nutter
hehe :confident
Gay warriors are funny!


Ok, here is my new pic(photo). (I increased the contrast in HP)

http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Masupilami_fixed_klein.jpg

The face is a little bit brightly because my lamp.
original (http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Masupilami2_klein.jpg)

[dubpsychosis]

I like the idea but I see some mistakes: Her right arm is in a bad position I think it should be more hidden or maybe it's about the collar bones...anyway that place looks a little to flat.
and her left leg..the calf is too short.

The monkey is owesome :^^:
keep posting I'm watching you :teeth:

[Lovelock]

:up: What Princess said...

+ She definately have some problems with shoulders (your monkey-girl, not dubpsycho' :confident ) and elbows. Just look at some photos, and fix this. I feel this will be a one-time lesson. :^^:

+ Her head looks a little too big, although I dont know her age. But by looking at some... Bodyparts (Male'sEye again!) I am preety sure that she is nearly mature..! :$

+ The gay warriors are NOT FUNNY AT ALL..! :uzi2: :^^:

+ Next time make sure the light is good, when shootin' a photo of a pic.

The shading, and atmosphere on this one is surely great. Jungle, lightbeams, I mean everything. Keep up posting!!! (because for my updates, Youll have to WAIT..! :P )

[chr!z]

thx for your critics :teeth: (its hard to draw from mind...but i draw from mind all the time ^^, maybe i should use some photos)
I try to consider the most points in my future pics.

Here is some more stuff from school... damn, I shouldn't draw so much ... my marks... :/

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Hexer.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/sketches_klein.jpg

[maknien]

Heya. You have nice characters here!
This one caught my eye http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Klein/moe_small.jpg . Also the last character line has nice designs. Seems like you have spent a bit more time on those which you posted on the first post.

C: How should I say this. Your anatomy need some polishing. :wink: If I were you, I would do more linedrawing and quick studies on anatomy. Poses, hands, bone lengths, face anatomy. Anything to get more accurate. Though you like to draw from your mind, now you should pick up some references and EXAMINE how things work.

Keep on drawin'n'posting!

[Jaster]

Hey Chris, nice to see you there.

I really love the way youre shading your characters. You also draw great poses with a lot of movement and action, but you should work on your proportions, most of them are a bit off. Keep em coming!

[van]

Don't ever say you shouldn't draw so much! Draw MORE, MORE, and the MORE! :confident

[Sam256]

Auch ein Leipziger! yeah! Me 2!

What's the school's name you are going to?

Nice works. But if you want' to learn anatomy, then head for a life drawing class (HGB Leipzig, Burg Giebichenstein Halle) or get an anatomy book and draw from life.

[chr!z]

@maknien
thx for your helpful critcs. Can you explain "linedrawings" plz? Drawings with few and clear lines?

@Jaster
I work for it ^^

@Van
But school is important :perv: :^^:
I try to find the perfect way between being concentrated and drawing.

@Sam
:D
Ich geh auf die Rahnschule. Fachoberschule, Fachrichtung Gestaltung. Hab vor auf die HGB zu kommen wenn die Noten und meine skills es hergeben :S
Soll jan großer andrang sein.

I draw from life, since last week, every Thursday in my school. (3€) :wink:


The first one is from school, the 2nd are some fast selfpics. (i should do more selfpics, its great fun :D)

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Devil_small.jpg

http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/selfpicsnsketch_small.jpg

[Lovelock]

So THAT's how You look like..! MAN..! Its SO scary..! :nohope:

Just kidding around. Well, nothing can take from me what I had learned on the boring lessons in school... :confident Its the greatest time, to draw, draw, draw, and draw...............
I like the devil's pose, great shaidng there. I like the fanatsy races/classes in line. This Hexer of Your's reminds me somethin' bout G. Brom. Heard of him..?
Anyways: Grat works here. I can't update so often, so I stick around You, Dub, and some other for now... Im trying to do 'the anatomy thing' now... :zzz:

[TGping]

I think the alien(first post) is my favorite.

you definitely have me beat when it comes to drawing from life :)
I'll get on it, maybe...

anyway, crits well actually you seem to be well on your way to perfecting technique so just keep doing what you've been doing. :)

[chr!z]

@Lovelock
Good luck man ;D
And indeed i know Brom! He is my favourite artist. He inspired my for much works, and without him, ... i think i wouldn't love fantasy that much.

@TGping
Thx for your post ;)
I try my best!

http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Dl2M_small.jpg

http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Dragonlance_small2.jpg

[ApolloNuevo]

this is a great start! i am really liking the variety of character designs in the genre. however, most of your characters look unbalanced. it really throws what might be a good design. and i love the dragon's head!!! really great.

-dan

[chr!z]

Thx for reply Apollo ;)
But what do you mean with unbalanced characters? Because the style of my pics changes everytime? If u mean that, i can say that it maybe depends on learningprocess.

:yayca:

[Sawa]

hey chr!s!
great sketchbook you got here :) im really diggin all those freaking creatures :^^: keep on rockin man!

sawa

[Lovelock]

Hey, this dragon of Yours looks really cool..! Nice shading there. The "Dragon Lance" one is nice too, but the dragon is as far Your best pic I think. I think You should work a little to make Your character's faces better.

Well, I just LOVE Brom's works..! But mine works don't look like his... And Your do. :confident Keep it up!

All for now.
Really BIG one..! :)

[chr!z]

@That fat kid
Thx for your sweet words ;D
The dark areas are unlightened because i make fotos. The pics are too big for my scanner. When i push the contrast higher, the dark places become darker. (if i understand u right)

@Sawa
thx man! I am on it!

http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Phoenix_small.JPG

[Rootlin]

Wow..
I like your stuff A LOT.
You've got some fine b&w sense. :)

And.. there is a bit of brom style here somewhere. :}
Keep it up!
I'll check this page regularly...

[chr!z]

Yay, Brom rulezz! thx Rootlin ;)

http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/GSG10_female.jpg

[Rootlin]

hmm.. :confident
Well..
Fine weapons . Especially this belt attached, left side. Best.
Ain't they too heavy? >:D :bashful: These pants should be fallin' down.. :P

[chr!z]

Hehe, these weapons are superlightweighted! Totally futuristic! :dur:

http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/Ent_small.jpg

http://www.deviating-visions.de/chris/young_hero_small.jpg

[noiion]

Wow! Some wonderfully drawing images, man. Your improvements are phenominal. On obvious problems that I saw on your females that you drew, ie the Monkey girl and the one dodging an attack from behind, the foremost deltoids looks smaller than the ones furthur away should be the other way around. :) I love that devil picture. The pose is great. Keep posting, man. By the way, who's Lovelocks?

[chr!z]

hey Noiion, thx for your helpful critics and your nice words!
lovelock is an other artist, i think his style is like yours. :teeth:


http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/AZ2_small.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/AZ4_small.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/AZ6_small.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/gesichterscribbles.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Scribbles16.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Seilspringer.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/voodoo_priest.jpg

:yayca:

[chr!z]

Hey Folks,

i think now i have enough money for a Wacom or Graphire. But i cannot decide what i should take. What is better for me? I dont want to pay more than 200€.

mfg chris

[Sam256]

A Graphire is a WACOM Tablett. WACOM is the company, Graphire the model name.

www.wacom.de (http://www.wacom.de)

for 200€ it might be a WACOM Graphire 3

[chr!z]

Oh, i mean Wacom or Intous ^^ thx for reply

[Sawa]

ich glaub du hast Sam nicht richtig verstanden ^^ Wacom heißt die Firma die die Grafiktablets herstellt. Intuos und Graphire sind 2 verschiedene Modelle von der Firma.
ich glaube aber nicht dass du ein Intuos für unter 200€ kriegst. mein Graphire hat schon 180 gekostet ;) schau am besten mal bei http://europe.wacom.de/de/index.asp da findest du alle Modelle dies gibt und auch Preise.
hope that helped you.
sawa

[chr!z]

@sawa
Was denkst du denn was besser ist, Intous2 oder Graphire3?

@That fat kid
I allready have a scanner, but my works are bigger than A4 and in the last time, it doesn't works. I'll try to buy a new sketchbook with A4paper ;) (b-coz
my old one is nearly full)

Not enough ready stuff, more scribbles, but i don't know whether i should show you that bad stuff :\

[chr!z]

Here we go!

Stuff from school/home
http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/peng.jpg

Stuff from school
http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Bionachhilfe.jpg

Stuff i have drawn while watching stargate ;)
http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/old_dwarf.jpg

[Rookie80]

Hi Chr!z I like your stuff, you going better every Picture you draw

[chr!z]

thx man! That keeps me postin'!

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/pflopp.jpg

[chr!z]

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/(1)sniper02.jpg

[Saise]

I don't know what to write - Some of Your Works is Awesome, some Good and some no so Good :D You don't have one level or art craft if i can Say :> But... more of your works is good and higher so i can say without any problems, that you have nice and interesting stuff in here.

[Sawa]

hey dude, nice update! the anatomy is not bad so far. maybe add sum more shading to it.
i also love the dwarf in post 48 (is it a dwarf? ive never seen stargate oO) dunno what it is, but it makes me want to draw dwarves... however
keep postin yer stuff, its great!

[Yodaah]

Hi,

I'd agree with Saise. It's quite difficult to judge here. Some of your work is somekind of realstic, proportions and shading is quite good (for example the woman with the gun in post #37) and then there's other artwork with an artistic level below that (as in your last post: her head is to big and there are not enough values in the sketch). So, yes you have some interesting ideas, but maybe you should concentrate on the finishing of some works before beginning the next and posting it. That's just my opinion, but I think this would bring you further.


Grüße nach Leipzig!

[shyamshriram]

Some nice stuff here...but i can see lots of diff. in sketches...the sketches u've posted first..are better than the rest..i think they are recent..
anyways..keep posting man...u r not bad at anatomy..:) the first sketch is my fav.

[van]

Hrm. Maybe what the guys above are trying to say is...keep rocking. Keep drawing. Go!

Everything is looking awesome. Proportions are off here and there, yes...but you can probably see that with your own eyes. We all do it at one time or another.

[jtheanswer]

I see some pontential here! Keep on posting, boy.

[TGping]

well you could invest in a scanner that scans a larger page size like A3(which is 11"x17") I just bought a mustek A3 size scanner off of ebay, and it came with photoshop 5. and it was only 180$. and I just got a graphire 3 tablet, and its friggin sweet! that was only 80$ this is all USD though I imagine the prices are similar

C&C will come later... must play with.. tablet... blarg!

[chr!z]

Finally...

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/cp_female.jpg


http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/russian_soldier%20Kopie.jpg


http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/cyberpunk_ssj%20Kopie.jpg

[Rookie80]

First Illustration Nice one.
Secound The face look inclined
Third one The leg is too short i think
But The Rest are very nice ones :P

[chr!z]

The One leg is is bended =)

[chr!z]

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/mugli.jpg

I have drawn it in 2 historylessons.

[JaneM]

You have some pretty cool works here, and you seem very familiar with the human anatomy. The faces could still need some work and practice though, but keep 'em all coming! :D

[TGping]

been awhile eh? lol

get that scanner?

[Rookie80]

Hi Chr!z yoir new Work is very good. but the mouth looks strangely

[Lazy]

I can see obvious improvement
I like your characters, you have pretty neat ideas and nice shading.
But as said before it varies very much, and i am not feeling the faces for some reason but thats a personal preference.
So keep it coming, i like what i see :)

[chr!z]

@JaneM
Thx! Jay, I practice everyschoolday, but just from my mind. Maybe thats the reason why I don,t gain enough experience.

@TGping
No, unfortunately I haven't enough money. But I think atm i need a graphic tablet. But thx for your tip.

@Rookie80
Yes, i am dissatisfied too...

@Lazy
The fluctuations results on my aktually Mind condition. If i am concentrated and patiently, i draw good pictures. In the last time I am not patiently enough, but get better. So, good pics doesn't need so much time.

stuff i draw at school

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/flamethrower.jpg http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/diebesstensterbenjung Kopie.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/scribble13 Kopie.jpg

[maxetormer]

Good work, very good eye for dinamics, you still have
some balance and proporcion problems here and there
but you most certanly have the abilitly to work this things out
KEEP GOING!!! :^^: see ya later

[chr!z]

thx for comment :^^:

New stuff from school

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/scribble12_22.jpg http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/winterskater2.jpg

[chr!z]

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/neu-3.jpg

[chr!z]

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Raist.jpg

[TGping]

it seems you use a scanner from school, that's the next best thing to actually buying one...

it looks as though your figure drawings are improving quite a bit. keep it up!

[Sam256]

Hello again fellow Leipziger!

I'm writing in german, I hope you guys don't mind:
Seit ich das letze mal hier war, hat sich viel an deiner Technik und vorallem Beobachtung verbessert. Der nächste Schritt wäre es sich vom reinen Ausarbeiten der Details mehr auf das große Ganze zu Konzentrieren. Damit meine ich Sachen wie eine konkretere Lichtsituation (Von wo kommt das Licht? Was liegt im Schatten? etc.) und etwas mehr Schwung (Grobe, schnelle Vorskizzen der Pose zum Beispiel. Das belebt das Endresultat unwarscheinlich.) Das wichtigste überhaupt ist, meiner Meinung nach, das Zeichnen/Studieren von realen Vorlagen und ich meine damit nicht unbedingt still sitzende Aktmodelle, sondern Menschen in ihrem alltäglichen Verhalten, Gegenstände, Oberflächen, einfach Alles.

Es ist schön deine Entwicklung zu verfolgen. Vielleicht kann man sich in Zukunft mal zum skizzieren, austauschen etc. treffen?

[chr!z]

@TGping
A bit maybe ... thx :D But I think I stagnate since the last months.

@Sam256
Hehe, thx for the huge Post :D
Scheinst Recht zu haben, aber warscheinlich hält mich oft Faulheit davon ab noch länger an bildern zu sitzen oder wirklich total realistisch den Schatten auszuarbeiten. Aber in manchen Fällen macht es auch Spass. Hab mich mal annem Mädel aus der Klasse versucht.

Here I have drawn a Portrait of a classmate.
http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/antje.jpg

Here an nother Pic. The gay guy on the pic is me. So u might ask why i draw such bullshit. The answer is, today, we had a very boring artlesson without teacher, an so i have drawn this.
http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/gaylord_kriss.jpg

Here two reallifedrawings
http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/az(small) .jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/az2.jpg

[chr!z]

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Arrrr!.jpg

[Sam256]

Ich glaub du hast mich da falsch verstanden. Nicht länger an einem Bild sitzen, sondern eher schnelle Skizzen von deiner Umwelt machen. Das schult die Auffassungsgabe, füllt deine Bilderbibliothek in deinem Kopf und bringt neuen Schwung in deine Linien. Und wenn du ein längeres Bild zeichnen willst, dann mach dir lieber vorher genauer Gedanken zum Inhalt und Aussehen und mache eine grobe Vorskizze. Das erspart dir viele Fehler beim Ausarbeiten des eigentlichen Bildes.

Die Aktzeichnungen sind da schon der richtige Schritt. Wohin gehst du zum Aktzeichnen? HGB, Abendakademie? Oder gibt es mittlerweile auch etwas für nicht HGBler und nicht Abendakademiker? Würde so gerne auch mal wieder Aktzeichnen. Muss mich mit bekleideten Menschen zufrieden geben, die so in der Gegend rumlaufen und rumsitzen.

Grüße

- der On -

[chr!z]

yay, hey folks!

I'have bought a graphire 4Xl

and thats my first try :D

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/meinerstesmal.jpg

[chr!z]

my 2nd real try

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/floeppine.jpg

[chr!z]

an another one, thats great fun!

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/teaslut Kopie.jpg

[chr!z]

I proudly present, the Dentplagueman!

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Dentplagueman.jpg

[zao75231]

man, your stuff is real good, your shading on the anatomy is right on the money. Maybe one crit to give you that I see alot in your drawings is the deltoids. Draw them bigger and more natural, make everything flow better and add more graceful looks to your drawings i suppose. Other than that, that's about it, keep 'em coming man.

-Rob

[chr!z]

yeah, thx for c&c! I try to consider your crit.

Here an new one. kinda kiddiemechanic! I am very open for crit!

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/1272/crafterfinal2ni.jpg

Here (http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/crafter_final.JPG) the big one (so many details get lost in the small version)

[chr!z]

new stuff from school

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Spielmann.jpg

[maxetormer]

yep imo this last one is the most propocionate off the stuff you have posted
so far, good relaxed pose, nice perspective, his head might be a bit to big,
but overall it seams you are getting real good at sensing propocions.

[chr!z]

thx mate! That keeps me drawin :teeth:

here is some unready stuff, i dont think that i complete them
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/7853/schwarzerose8ya.jpg

And here a quikie

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/troll.jpg

[chr!z]

new stuff from school :P

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/hl1.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/hl2.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/hl3.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Springer_klein.jpg

[chr!z]

Char-reference for the game http://www.wolfhead.de.vu/

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/springer_vorn_small.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/springer_hinten_small.jpg

without armor and with clips
http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/hinten2_small.jpg
http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Vorne2_small.jpg

[chr!z]

I would be happy if you have some c&c :teeth:

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/u-scribble_no_x.jpg

[chr!z]

I have some problems with my upload. I hope i'll get it fixed.

Without any ref :D
http://www.directupload.net/images/060509/iua5TiL5.jpg

[chr!z]

hmh, i hate backrounds...

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Pfurz2.jpg

plz post c&c :[

[chr!z]

:D:D:D

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/ungleicher kampf Kopie.jpg

[chr!z]

Ok guys. I decided to show you my other stuff too. The sketches i normaly wouldnt upload, but i want to become a better artist and i want any c&c u can offer.
The most freetime i have is in school, so i draw there for 90% the week.


So here it is new stuff from school:

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/scribble1235small.jpg

http://www.directupload.net/images/060522/e6bDeBMW.jpg

[chr!z]

Is there nobody with useful critic? plzzz


(drawn in 3 schooldays)
http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/warlord.jpg

[chr!z]

damn, i am so inspired by marko...

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/blubbermann2.jpg

any critzz`?

[Zulle]

hey chriz
ich pack ma mein denglish aus .. moment los gehts .
sehr sehr nices scetchbook und echt hammer progress bis jetzt die letzten bilder sehen ich ziemlich geil aus --> http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/hl1.jpg

dat is sehr geil!

eine sache die mir aufgefallen is, dass deine köpfe meistens sehr groß sind und dadurch die proportionen immer etwas comichaft sind .. weis nich ob das beabsichtigt is oder nich aber ich finds die bilder von dir in denen die proportionen korrekt sind geiler ...

man ne schule extra für kunst .. das ja ma hammer .. wär auch gern auf son gym gegangen aber bei uns hier in unterfranken im letzten loch gibts sowas natürlich net >:( .. naja werd aufjeden bald irgendwo kunst studieren vielleicht ja in leipzig .. wennse mich nehmen ^^

bis denn hau rein!

[chr!z]

hey zullä :D

Thänks erstmal für deinen umfassenden post :D

Ich wünschte ich könnte jetzt sagen das die grossen köpfe beabsichtigt sind, aber das wär gelogen... muss ich noch dran arbeiten.

Also es ist im Grunde nur eine Fachoberschule. Etwas niedriger als ein Gymnasium , da man nur ein Fachabitur erhält mit dem man nur Gestalterische Dinge studieren kann. Also wenn du an der HGB in Leipzig studieren willst brauchst du aber warscheinlich erstmal das Alter. Die nehmen nemlich so gut wie nie Leute die direkt vom Gym kommen. Vorallem wollen sie welche mit Vorerfahrung wie ne Lehre etc. also mach dir direkt nachm Abi nich allzugroße Hoffnung da aufgenommen zu werden ;) Ich werd auch erstmal ne Lehre machen.

Zu meiner Schule: So geil is die auch wieder nicht. Hab mir das Zeichnen fast hauptsächlich selbst beigebracht. Die lehrer spinnen ziemlich und reden mehr von sich selbst und ihrer Einstellung als vom Unterrichtsstoff. (brauchst mich nicht beneiden ;) )
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For one week I worked as a probationer in the company Omniphone, where I created the skyline of my hometown.


http://www.directupload.net/images/060529/28zfZ773.jpg



and here some scribbles from school


http://www.directupload.net/images/060529/DBzo5W8y.jpg

http://www.directupload.net/images/060529/pmJDlEcU.jpg

http://www.directupload.net/images/060529/E3SWVQ23.jpg

[chr!z]

long time no see guys :rolleyes: ... too good weather for drawing pics :bashful:

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/creatures.jpg

[chr!z]

And here is my ugly face!!

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/moeee.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/gc_me1.jpg

Müüüp!

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/another_hero.jpg

[Sartell]

Very cool drawings, I really dig the characters in the enviro's that really makes them stand out. That last one has a really cool retro feel, w/ the obvious marko influence (this is okay:) ) My only crit would be that your torso's seem a little long in some and the arms and legs are looking too short because of it (me thinks~*) Keep going i'd love to see what you could do w/ color on one of these newer sketches!

[chr!z]

@Sartell

Thx buddy :)
Hmm, maybe they get colour in far future when i can handle my board a lil bit better ;)


http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/5984/zayacbestrx9.gif

Here is the birthdaypresent for my best friend. (he took the photo and forgot to switch off the light... :D)
http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Eragon.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/nakedrul0r.jpg

this pic is drawn while i was traveling by train
http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/sondershausen1.jpg

and this too
http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/sondershausen2.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/sondershausen3.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/sondershausen4.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/sondershausen5.jpg

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/harz4.jpg

Me on the GamesConvention ;)
http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/urgh(small).jpg

[krakel]

sehr schönes sketchbook! :D Vorallem die letzten paar posts und vorallem dieser kleine gamecharakter mit dem ballon am helm ist gut. Was mir aufgefallen ist sind vorallem die proportionen bei deinen charakteren sind meistens so ein bischen daneben ud tendierst zu kurzen beinen und ziemlich großen köpfen mit langen hälsen... Außerdem finde ich du solltest dich mal ein bischen mit komposition auseinandersetzen so als neues interessengebiet für die zukunft ;P

gruß

[chr!z]

@krakel
Du hast verdammt nochmal recht. Ich frag mich warum mir das immer wieder passiert... :[ (lange hälse und zu große köpfe)
Danke für deinen post!
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So guys. Atm i am working on my application for the HGB (Hochschule für Grafik und Buchkunst) in Leipzig.
And here is the Bushbill!

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/completedollar.jpg

[chr!z]

In a few days i will update some pencil stuff. The shit is to tall for my scanner so i have to take the cam of a friend.


http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Zockerweibchen.JPG

Some c&c plz? :)

[chr!z]

foeed!

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/(1)foedfoed.jpg

Some Crit plzzzz?

[chr!z]

Reference: My Brother (no photo)

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/olliklein.JPG

[krakel]

vile glück mit leipzig! Meine empfehlung wegen den digital drawings.. du solltest dich auf flüssigere linien konzentrieren! im moment sieht das alles zu hakig aus irgendwie.. wenn dann mach die farbe auch so ;P die ersten verusche waren von den values her besser find ich.. naja mach mal weiter da du kannst garantiert noch sehr viel rausholen

[chr!z]

Also zweiteres war auch nicht wirklich zur Veranschaulichung meiner Painterskills(;)), sondern eher ein Quicky in dem ich hauptsächlich darauf geachtet habe, ob er meinem Bruder ähnlich sieht.
Komm irgendwie nich so mit diesem kleinen Tablett klar...
Danke für deinen Post Krakel!

http://www.directupload.net/images/061211/QMapQuog.jpg http://www.directupload.net/images/061211/e8yNk5qw.jpg

[chr!z]

Here is my Necromancer (as a present for a friend) ca. 40x60 (DIN A2)

http://disoon.pyrokar.lima-city.de/upload/Necromancer.JPG

Its time for an slanting desk. Because, the lower part of the pic is closer to my eyes and so, the legs seem to be bigger and the upper part, the head looks smaller. That could be the readson for my big heads ...

[Sam256]

hello again.

You've defnitly improved allot since I last visited. Your shading with pencil is getting pretty good and I really like the sketch of your brother because of it's looseness.

But your characters are still looking pretty stiff and sometimes the proportions are little wicked. I think this comes from your tendency to start of with details instead with a rough sketch. I can only advise you to try some loose sketching to get a certain flow in your lines. What makes a picture look alive is not absolute perfection in detail, but an overall impression. Think about it. Maybe look at some impressionistic paintings.

You can try to draw with an easel to prevent the perspektive abbreviation on big paper. Or if you have no easel, then keep standing while drawing and draw big shapes with the movement of your arm not the movement of your wrist.

Anyway, it's great to see you are still practising!

Ondrej

[RaistlinTheDark]

love the texture, man. Nice work!
Cheers!

[chr!z]

I should start a new thread, all the old pics dont work.

http://www.directupload.com/files/t3ryjmgnzklmfjy3yygj.jpg

[chr!z]

new one :D

http://s2.directupload.net/images/070816/KAQH6qx6.jpg