Pin-Up...need help to complete

[andreasrocha]

I felt tempted to post this image at the "Finished Artworks" section, but instead I decided to put it here. Whenever I do Pin-ups I get to a stage where the image looks finished and lots of hours of work are behind. Most of the time, this is where I stop. But with your help I would to take this picture even further...Please give me comments/ideas about anything, like improvements, colour, background, light, etc. Thanks

If you want to see the various progress stages, follow the link:
Progress Bar (http://andreasrocha.no.sapo.pt/conceptart/Progress-Bar.jpg)

http://andreasrocha.no.sapo.pt/conceptart/Pin-up.jpg

[R_M]

Hi andreasrocha,
welcome back!
Can't you see she is screaming for some color? You have allready done all the hard work, now just give it the last push!
It is a great pice by the way, now finish it! :D

[Tedsuo]

Nice! Though I think her clavicle may be too high up, it's flattening her neck out.

[mushuhaha]

Her arms are too short, legs are too long and too big, and her hips are too wide. It almost look like you paste the upper half and lower half of two different people (different size) together. You need to redo your proportions to get her look right.