CharacterSketches/cyberpunk/fantasy

[DustinTrimble]

I appologize in advance for the crappy webhost, but I am looking for some feed back on these drawings.

These sketches are characters for a cyberpunk world, I took some influence from Dues Ex in the first one here.(played it for the first time and beat it last week.)

http://www.geocities.com/xstin2000/cypunk1b.htm
http://www.geocities.com/xstin2000/cybergal1.htm
http://www.geocities.com/xstin2000/cyberspecialist1.htm
http://www.geocities.com/xstin2000/cypunk1a.htm

And this last was a sketch of an adventurious woman in fantasy clothing with guns.

http://www.geocities.com/xstin2000/fantasygal2.htm

[soupface]

definitely some deus-ex going on. that game was great.

the first seems to be the best of the bunch as far as proportion and pose. his face looks sorta flat (esp. eyes), while the rest of his body has depth. try to draw everything like it's an object (don't think about drawing 'eyes', but look in the mirror and see what shapes they are: sphere etc.). that'll help alot with drawing other stuff too.

the second's pose is really strange. it's like she's trying to fix a wedgie without touching her pants...

the rest all have strange poses. think carefully about what they're doing (standing, jumping) before just drawing the body. sometimes the pose itself is reasonable, but the position of certain body parts is unnatural (esp. fantasygal2's legs and feet).

keep that in mind, and keep sketching

[DustinTrimble]

Soupface, thanks for the crit! Yeah I seem to have trouble nailing the gesture down, before going into trying to work out the anatomy, I will try and watch out for that:P Here is a few more:

http://www.geocities.com/xstin2000/swordlass1.htm

http://www.geocities.com/xstin2000/cyberarmguy1.htm

http://www.geocities.com/xstin2000/cyberleggirl1.htm

Comments and crits welcome.

[soupface]

dustin, good stuff. the proportions are a lot better, and the poses aren't awkward like before (although a bit less ambitious).

i like cyberarmguy1's cyberarm, and his flexing pose and facial expression (trying to show off, isn't he?). swordlass1's hips don't match with the rest of her body (they're facing the viewer more than they should). cyberleggirl1 looks good too, and the quasi-thrust pose is expressive.

keep it up.