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[Kiraya]

Hey! A friend of mine is obsessed with this place so that caught my interest in this place. =)

This is my try at character designing.
Initially she started at as a redesign of quistis trepe from final fantasy 8 but I just went crazy with her outfit. I got a few comments that it doesnt look anything like the original character anymore. =(

She looks ready for the harvest too. :p

http://www.channel314.com/images/kiraya_quisoff.jpg

[soupface]

kiraya, that looks great. your proportions are good, the colouring is nice, and everything's done very cleanly.

my only complaints would be her left arm and hand (which look twisted. her hand position is discomforting, and her upper arm seems warped), and her dress (it's good, but the cloth needs more detail. since one leg is infront of the other, there should be a sense that its up against her dress. right now the dress just looks flat).

fine work.

[keyth]

i'm into it. nice design. i agree w/soupy. i'd fix the dress before anything. it almost looks like a simple gradient done in photoshop.

i'd love to see more:chug:

[mushuhaha]

Hahaha, yay~~ pretty shoes. Is she wearing any socks?

[Muttonhead]

Awesome character design!

My only suggestion is make the skirt a little less flat. You have some nice, subtle modelling in the hair and arms, but the skirt/torso area just looks very flat and graphic.

Also, the thunb on her right hand seems a bit boney/wonky. I would make the bump at the base of her thumb less severe.

Please post more characters! Good job!

-S.A.M.

[CKWorth]

This is beautiful. Hehe, before I even read any of your words my first thought was that she looked like Quistis. :D I love that costume and the colors. It's got that autumn/halloween feel to it that I am a sucker for. I don't have anything else to point out that hasn't already been said. Just wanted to tell you how much I liked it.

[Yaseck]

I like this style very much. The lineart and the colours are great. Keep posting!

[Landmate]

so nice ^^

[Kiraya]

Thank you everyone for your comments and suggestions.
I'll try to work out the dress again when I get the free time (and if I remember to) =)

XD

[jrr]

looks good, kid!