graphite drawing

[ayouya]

http://artisitic.t35.com/leavesthumb.jpg

the rest of my gallery www.ayas-art.tk

drawing competitions going on right now ...art forum....graphite drawing gallery.....art links and tutorials......

[madster]

Nice sketch, but 2-year old sketches aren't really anything to write home about.

Your website needs A LOT of work, though...
What is "newly begginners" mean?
Also, try getting rid of all the commas in that one, overly long and confusing paragraph sentence, and break it up into at least 3-4 different sentences, trying to use capital letters at the start of each one...

You should also clearly state that the tutorials are NOT yours, but are links to other sites.


The paypopup.com popups are enough to make anyone with half a brain avoid your site at all costs. (Hint, hint, HINT...and that's with all my popup software set on high...)
~M

[melvin]

grammar aside ( i know plenty of native english speakers who do much worse), madster is right; do you have any recent stuff to post? i'm sure you'd get some good critiques.