noob art (updated with dirty NUDITY)

[MadMaxMan]

Not very good at english, C&C greatly apreciated although.
Photo ref & painter 7 used:

http://bullfighter2.eresmas.net/mad110.JPG

[keyth]

i'm all over it. this is really cool. nice style. post more.

[MadMaxMan]

thx keyth here are 2 more, i dont know if they would be better under the sketch forums, but i dont usually go much further than this:

http://bullfighter2.eresmas.net/MAD100.JPG

http://bullfighter2.eresmas.net/MAD96.JPG

[soupface]

very nice work madmaxman (3m?). i like the style of the first one. i can see the red-pink nose despite the lack of actual colour. i know the focus is her face, but nonetheless you might want to finish it a bit more, specifically the doll on the table.

the cars look nice, i like the concepts (but why renault?). the perspective on the wheels in the first is a little off (but it's a sketch so only the concept really matters). i like the quick feel they have and how they still look professional. good stuff.

[navel_lint]

i love your use of sharp corners
in the top image of the girl. there's definately
mass movement and an excellent sense of space.

[tyboogie]

great work---that first one reminds me of leyendecker--ty

[el coro]

verrry nice...

[davi]

very very cool, the hair on the girl almost looks like she has a rose on here.

[Yaseck]

Do not tear apart the breast by the hooks of self-criticism. You're not a such a noob. I like this girl.

[chukw]

Beatiful work! The girl is so well done-I love the little dolly. The cars are very nice- great headlights. but soupface is right- watch your ellipses! More, please.

[Makafui]

wow dude, nice to see you again i know you from shane glines forum, i mailed u a while back soon after that peice with the girl with her hands holding a rope from her swim suit and u sent me some art, nice to see you here :)

[MadMaxMan]

Thanx everyone for the crits.

Hi makafui, yeah i remember you from shane's classes i dont recieve many mails like yours.thanx for the kind words.

Here are two more images, I'm sure these ones have more criticable things than the ones sent before, sorry to those who have already seen them on the drawing jam, again photo ref and painter 7 were used:

http://bullfighter2.eresmas.net/mad86.jpg

http://bullfighter2.eresmas.net/mad75.JPG

Thanx in advance..

[Loga4]

Hi,Mad,I like your stuff,hope
we will see more from you,thanks.

[Muttonhead]

Unique style!

I would say stick with figures. The cars are good, but way over-played.

Your figures, however, have an expressive quality that I find quite inventive! Lets see more!

-S.A.M.

[navel_lint]

i really like the first nude.
he swirled nipples and anti-art style do it for me.