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Rich Pellegrino
August 13th, 2005, 10:22 AM
Kind of had no response in the fine art studies section here in CA so I post here! Would greatly appreciate any crits on these. Thanks!

Sargent study

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v652/voodoochile969/DSCF0027.jpg

draoery study

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v652/voodoochile969/clothstudy.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v652/voodoochile969/DSCF0028.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v652/voodoochile969/DSCF0031.jpg

J-Rock
August 13th, 2005, 12:52 PM
yeah man ..these are good.All im guna say is that you should indicate skelletal structure more in the first peice. like shoulder,elbow,wrist, rib cage.
The drapery looks sweet, nice colors. The third one.ummm wat is he sitting on? and there seems to be sum anatomy probs,but i assume you know that.And on the fourth one.the best one I think,the buttocks and hip area seems a little off,and it does look like its too blended..but hey great stuff and Id like to see sum more soon.

Gilead
August 14th, 2005, 12:37 AM
The 4th one is quite strong, I'm reminded of Jeff Jones; strong stark and lots of brown. You're going in the right direction, keep going.

The fine art studies section doesn't get the attention it deserves. It's not your work, there's just no traffic there.

Arctis
August 14th, 2005, 09:38 AM
Nice studies, however maybe you could exagerate shadows in the first pict, to make the position of the arm clearer : right now there's an ambiguity between "too short arm" and "arm in perspective"
Don't hesitate to use bold deep blacks, as Sargent precisely.