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treeshark
August 8th, 2005, 11:21 AM
All p.shop hope you like.
http://www.treeshark.com/images/Posts/Maiden.jpg

schowalye
August 8th, 2005, 12:17 PM
i like it...
i think you can increase contrast a bit... To demonstrate;
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v713/schowalye/Maiden3.jpg
i hope you don't mind; changing it without your permission.
In fact if it can be done manually by giving more values, it would add more...
No other crits, thanks for your patience on this piece...

treeshark
August 8th, 2005, 01:16 PM
Thanks for comment, yes it could be pushed a bit, I've updated the image above.
Here's another: Painter this time.
http://www.treeshark.com/images/Posts/bath.jpg

Gilead
August 8th, 2005, 01:25 PM
Very pretty, I like it.
You handled the patterning in the border very nicely where the circle meshes with the square. You might change the gemstones so that they all look like the light comes from the same direction.
The weakest part of this picture is the figure itself which is a little more cartoonish than the setting. It kinda' reminds me of an old Disney cartoon like Snow White where the backgrounds were painted rather realistically and then these simple cartoons were dancing around out front. Yours isn't anywhere near as drastic as that, but there does appear to be a difference in the level of finish between the figure and the background.

treeshark
August 8th, 2005, 02:59 PM
Thanks Gilead, a good crit, I was a little scared of her merging with all the fancy stuff, here she is again... oh and those pesky jewels are fixed too.
http://www.treeshark.com/images/Posts/maiden2.jpg

Gilead
August 8th, 2005, 07:30 PM
Yeah I like that better.

van.bot
August 8th, 2005, 09:47 PM
good work.. i think the background male figure in the bathtub picture looks a little like a dog-man. mostly becasue of the shading undernose is quite a bit stronger than the rest of the face.

but its pretty cool. the maiden looks good too.

treeshark
August 9th, 2005, 04:07 PM
good work.. i think the background male figure in the bathtub picture looks a little like a dog-man. mostly becasue of the shading undernose is quite a bit stronger than the rest of the face.
LOL yep he sure does now you point it out... thought of putting it right then thought hey Dogman, that must be a character already but google and nothing, so how come Cat woman is cool and Dogman aint?
well here he is...
http://www.treeshark.com/images/Posts/bathdog.jpg