Chaos Always Calms

[Lastexit]

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I would like some feedback on the words rather than the image. what was your first reaction to the words? was it positive or negative? and how would you change it?

[Negafen]

I didn't notice the words right away, and my response was an inward groan because it feels so cliche.

Then I wondered whether it was posted in the wrong place.