Mecha-horse wip coloring!!!!

[aturkone]

Hi! This is a mecha-horse for my first real project...All critiques are welcome...(Sorry for my bad english)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y42/aturkone/horse2.jpg

[update 1]
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y42/aturkone/horseman3.jpg
Thanks for all the comments...you guys realy help me to keep this going!This morning I have removed the distracing looking lines...I think the horse spines may bend later with my new mechanical technology :rolleyes: ?!?! ...and now working on the character ...
:blahblah:...I try to make a cool gun design for this guy...at last I like one of these combinations...Tell me your opinion about the gun and the other things

[update 2](06/8/05)
:overhere:Hi...Here's the wip coloring...the lighting is on progress...there are so much work remained...I hate the anatomy of the rider now....I'm sure there are milions of mistakes waiting to be revealed:dead:I hope u like it...All critiques are welcome...(Sorry for my bad english...)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y42/aturkone/wip.jpg

[-Optix]

Hey thats pretty cool!

[WrittenShadow]

very nice, you have an excellent grasp of equine anatomy, though the perspective on the back end doesn't seem to line up with the rest of the body and horse's spines don't bend like that....

[dadamafia]

i think you need to work on the composition. lookin good.

[Fozziebear27]

Very nice. The rider you added goes along with the horse design very well.

[aturkone]

:^^;: this makes me feel better thanks :^^:

[halflife99]

Cool work. :)

[possessed]

overall this looks very promising. great design and dynamic posing. The only thing bothering me is how the two rear legs point to each other. Dunno if you used reference for it but it just looks a bit odd to me.

[Delta 1]

kinda looks like its jumping--but I love the design!!!

[aturkone]

Thank everyone who critiques here...I'm very happy to see more...:^^:cuz I need more...
possessed:Thank you for your precious comment...you are absolutely right...I also feel sick about that...:painting:I started to paint it ,then I use some tricks like dust and motionblur kinda things;)...I will be very happy if you can wait and see my incoming :wip: uptade to check if the problem is solved or not...:^^:
(sorry for my bad english)

[aturkone]

check the wip coloring plz :bashful: