Cavewoman

[Tobin]

This is for a draw off at digitalwebbing.com/forums

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/9919/cavewomanwip19du.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bout 40 mins, i used reference (although nothing was exact so I had to use a few images) ... im starting to think i should do that more.

tell me what you think so far!

[endercoskun]

she's pretty sexy for a cavewoman, but who cares :D

well, i think the legs are a bit short. other than that, looks good so far.

[Tobin]

hehe sex sells...

the legs are a bit short, that was my effort not to give her a supermodel body.. but I might make them an ickle longer ..

[USER777]

her right arms looks really wierd.. look up some anatomy if you want it to look more realistic.

[Cookiedough]

She doesn't scream 'cavewoman' to me. More: 'strike a pose, we need to sell this jungle-outfit'. I have no idea what she's supposed to do. Give her a weapon, battling some creepy beast or cuddling some wild pet. She needs a better attitude, or else this chick is dooomed! :P

I agree about the legs being too short and pretty thin. The wrist and elbow of the right arm don't translate very well. If you don't want her to look like a supermodel: she could use some stronger legs and arms then, more atletic than elegant.

The feet and her left leg are also a bit off atm. I just tried that pose and most of her weight should be on her left leg, which means that one should be firm on the ground. Her hip should stick out a bit more and her leg should be straighter to keep her in balance.The pose kinda suggests she's wearing heels/is a bit floaty.

Also, i'n not so sure about her upperbody, her ribcage vs hip position seems a bit odd. She might need some more room for her left longue. Maybe her ribcage is twisted a bit too much to her left and that's also why her right arm seems strange too. She should show more of her right armpit then you drew in now, but that would also change the elbow/wrist...hmmm.. :\

I'm not to sure about this, but maybe my rambling can help you improve the details. Curious about the endresult.

[Ni*]

this is kind of heading towards pin up style by the looks of it, and i like the start, especially the blocked in colours, but i agree with the previous posts, she doesn't scream 'cavewoman' but i assume thats not really where you are going with it. and i'm sure you see her right arm is way too long :-p

take a look at the bikini website 'wildweasle' or something, there's loads of good sexy poses like that. what about having her stretching after crouching over a fire cooking mamoth meat? it might give more of a sexy snap shot feel rather than a 'planned calendar shoot' feel. just a thought, i look forward to seeing this progress.

cheers

N

[Pandora's Eyes]

great job on the girl! i love her pose and you did very well with her proportions. was she referenced?

i tend to reccommend against reference material. it's better to do studies if you have to and then draw from memory. it'll sharpen your artistic mind.

post the finished image when you're done.

[Tobin]

Yeah I used about 4 pics for loose reference.. shes a frankenstein creation ...

The pose still looks pointless now but the boulder at the bottom left is actually a cave man, and shes luring him into the cave for procreation reasons :D

[Elwell]

great job on the girl! i love her pose and you did very well with her proportions.
Except for her CRAZY MR. FANTASTIC GIBBON ARM!!!!!! :nohope:

[Tobin]

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/7715/cavewomanwip20cb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

still fixin things hopefully finished by tomorrow

[Midnight]

Hmm - my question would be: Why is she posing like this? That rock's going to have a good view, but so far the piece feels very contrived.

Mid.

[Tobin]

Hmm - my question would be: Why is she posing like this? That rock's going to have a good view, but so far the piece feels very contrived.

Mid.



the boulder at the bottom left is actually a cave man, and shes luring him into the cave for procreation reasons it will become more apparent when i work some on the head of the cave man.