Captain Crush: Superbloke

[Basho]

Here is Captain Crush. He lives in a city filled iwth super heroes who think the whole world is like a comic book. He comes from a city with a tad harsher reality and has basically become the primary superhero in his city. He finds it all bothersome and simply beats the crap out of the bad guys.

I hope everyone enjoys this pic!

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/Zatransis/Color/MGH.jpg

[stoph]

hmm i dunno dude as far as characters go i think your main guy is one of the weaker (compared to that of the piled up guys) perhaps if he werent so.. i dunno, bland? you cant see his entire mechanical arm which is one down-point, another is that hes too simplistic and uninteresting. he needs something to break up the blue of his spandex, you know? keep going this is a fun piece!

[Qitsune]

I misread that for capitain Crunch, I was expecting an elderly pirate beating up villains!

The stripped background disturbs me. I think it clashes with the lettering.

[ApolloNuevo]

yeah, same as above...the typography is killing this piece. to your credit though, all the characters are well drawn and look solid. but really, i would make the main character's pose more dynamic...and i think it would do good to add depth by putting him slightly behind the pile of evil-doers. bg is rotten, ditch it and start again. i would seriously consider your color scheme as well...

-dan