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MAD WILL
July 19th, 2005, 12:17 PM
That i do some time ago in a3 size in pencil.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y175/weare7/No%20scanner/mY%20art/Glad1.jpg
I don't know if that pic it's good for this thread, but it's a good job for me
Mr. Visions
July 19th, 2005, 12:40 PM
This is a nice piece, showing your strengths in rendering. The only crit that I have is the face could use some more attention in rendering. I'm guessing this is the Mighty Maximus from gladiator. I think stronger values and more stubble would bring out the likeness. Nice.

- Visions
ryanwh
July 19th, 2005, 12:43 PM
something about how the area below the nose is shaded almost makes him look like he has a cleft lip. The area right above the upper lip, on most people, is always lighter than the lip below it or the the concave area above it, so put that little bit of light over the upper lip and he'll look less like a cat.
MAD WILL
July 20th, 2005, 11:15 AM
Thanks all for coment, i'll post again more big.
Mr. Visions and ryanwh: You all agree in same thing... the face is my problem, if you look for hands will see another problem...but thanks for coments
:confident
MAD WILL
July 25th, 2005, 06:44 AM
Like a saw, post the same image a little more big
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y175/weare7/No%20scanner/mY%20art/Glad.jpg
Hive_minD
July 26th, 2005, 11:11 AM
you gett 10 out of 10 from me!!!!! love gladiator!
post some more drawings please... love too see your work!

Hive_minD
ElvisMcVegas
July 26th, 2005, 01:04 PM
I think the main thing wrong with this is that his head is too small for the body you have him on...
http://www.joblo.com/images_movie_reviews/2-gladiator.jpg

Also the perspective is wrong on the back shoulder pad, it shouldnt be that big
Romulus
July 26th, 2005, 02:39 PM
Armor makes your body look bigger?
MAD WILL
July 27th, 2005, 06:31 AM
you gett 10 out of 10 from me!!!!! love gladiator!
post some more drawings please... love too see your work!

Hive_minD

<3 :^^: I can't believe that i listen this... thank you
MAD WILL
July 27th, 2005, 06:57 AM
I think the main thing wrong with this is that his head is too small for the body you have him on...

Also the perspective is wrong on the back shoulder pad, it shouldnt be that big

I don't have the original reference for show, but the head looks more big because the armoir and the shoulder pad (if i remember) it's more big that the left (i think), but I agree with that you I said
MAD WILL
July 27th, 2005, 06:58 AM
Armor makes your body look bigger?
YEAH!! That's i said before.
MAD WILL
July 27th, 2005, 07:38 AM
SORRY phlem117, SORRY, SORRY ME PLEASE, I WAS WRONG
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y175/weare7/No%20scanner/ref%20of%20works/gladiador.jpg
I find the pic reference in google, you are right.. :dur:
ElvisMcVegas
July 28th, 2005, 11:05 PM
Damn straite Im right
Calcaneus
July 28th, 2005, 11:39 PM
Its good your so modest, lol

MAD WILL: I was going to say the same thing anyways. The piece is very nice despite it. I'm envious of your rendering by the way. Maybe something like "push your values even further to get more contrast and make it pop" would be useful :P It looks good.
MAD WILL
July 29th, 2005, 08:41 AM
Thanks for coment guy, i see yor skeths in devintart,´is good, work on the faces of them, but it's very good :confident
Mr. Visions
July 29th, 2005, 09:02 AM
This is gettin' better. I would say increase the contrast in the face and it might bring out the features in his face. Play with that. I love the detail in the outfit. Holla at ya boi.

- Visions
MAD WILL
July 29th, 2005, 10:29 AM
I love the detail in the outfit. Holla at ya boi.

- Visions
What details you like?
And my english is terrible, what is "Holla at ya boi."? :\
Mr. Visions
July 29th, 2005, 11:16 AM
No problem dude. Sorry about that. It's slang, sorta like peace/ peace out or if you've heard the term "Holla Back" or "Holler at your main man:. Boi is a slang spelling of boy. Hahaha, anyway, I'm not gonna take up space in your thread about slang.
I like how you built up the shading in your Clothes, especially in the legs under the arm and his man-skirt. I think this piece can be really well executed, whether, regardless if it is straight from your reference shot. The face is what's really holding you back. May I sugest doing rough sketches of his face on another piece of paper, playing with strong contrasts/ shadows and get the feel of what you want. Nice work again man. Take care.

- Visions
Danilo
July 29th, 2005, 12:01 PM
This is much, much, much better from your digital work. Look at this tutorial: http://www.sofos.com/adi/tutorial.htm
MAD WILL
August 1st, 2005, 08:23 AM
@Mr. Visions: Like ever... thank you again. And thanks for the lesson... the word "boy" is "garoto" or "menino" and "boi" in portuguese is "bull"... it's not funny? heheheh... Loock the reference and my piece and you will see the perspective is "alterate" or "change", i just see that now, but not is all bad.


@Danilo: I agree with you, my digital art it's terrible, but with time... i'll get better!
About the tutorial :jawdrop: :yayca: it's amazing, i'll try it and post, but i lost my ps :^^;: , i'll get a try version just for post :wink:.


Thanks all again for help