new elven character - Lara

[djfournr]

hey all, originally I was supposed to be drawing a fairy but.. here is what happened, and I'm glad it did. Now on the next stages of .. coloring. :(

the first sketch

http://personal.southern.edu/~djfournr/images/Lara1.jpg

the ink

http://personal.southern.edu/~djfournr/images/Lara1_ink.jpg

and the second sketch

http://personal.southern.edu/~djfournr/images/Lara2.jpg

would love to hear comments and suggestions before I do something stupid coloring.

[Gray]

Looking good. I like the second best. Great pose. On the first the wings (i think they are wings) look like they come frome her head. Perhaps these should be lowered a bit.

I always imagined elves slim, almost skinny. So for me the breasts look a little to big. But perhaps that's just me. Do you think you'll be inking the second one? Wondering how this will turn out.

[djfournr]

thanks for replying gray. I was concerned about the breast size as well and actually was going to make her - 12 yr old sized, because for some reason that age reminds me of elves and fairies the most.. but I was talking to my wife and she said to make her a voluptuous woman. She also gave me the idea for the little outfit. Now its not like a fairy at all but I really like it. Am hoping to develop the character more.

I will definately be inking the second one soon. Hoping to have a few more to ink as well.

[KayCustomz]

I'ed like to see a colored one, overall I thinks its a great picture, I see it as a comic amost