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dzikus
July 18th, 2005, 10:45 AM
I felt that it doesn't belong to 'finished' thread.
That is one of my favourite pieces. I like especially that ball. It seems to be alive :)
enjoy
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y138/sekulah/kula.jpg

madster
July 18th, 2005, 10:54 AM
Good call on not posting it in "FF," because it is far from finished.
The "floor" the sphere is above is crooked and warped looking, the block shapes coming out of the wall are uneven and not "square" on the corners, the ceiling panel above the sphere is sloppily rendered, with uneven circles and squares.

Finished doesn't mean you're done drawing it. Finished means presentation quality. This is a nice sketch, but it is in no way a "finished" work.
It would make a nice illustration if you cleaned up the lines and perspective.

~M

Qitsune
July 18th, 2005, 05:58 PM
Yep, I'd like to see that in colors, with neat colored lighting.

dzikus
July 20th, 2005, 12:09 PM
You are right. thanks for crits.
I'm not sure about the lights, though
anyway - thanks for suggestions.

look
July 20th, 2005, 12:39 PM
It's a nice work, the ball is really nice indeed. The background can use more shading and contrast. Even if the ball is emitting light, there should still be different shades in the background. Like the area close to the ball would be lighter than the area further away.