Cauldron & Dethstress W.I.P.

[Captain Tomar]

This is a work in progress that i started a year or so ago and have yet to finish due to...well. i keep forgetting about it. anyway, it's a couple of characters from a Dungeons & Dragons game i ran a while back. The color is faaar from complete and in fact is just a base coat and the dragon man's (cauldron) hidden hand is just laziness on my part (as is the background castle now that i look at it). It is inked then scanned and colors in photoshop. Crits welcome.

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a48/Captain_Tomar/cauldron--deathstress.jpg

[lexdan90]

very cute characters, it looks like they're on a crusade. at first view i didnt noticed the dragon samurai had a tail. i feel its dynamic, but the castle could be showing more, a castle means a dungeon, adventure, experience points and it must be where the adventurers go to :rendered: . but my two main buggers are that he seems to have cracks on his wings, and the bird warrior seems to have no visible eye. then rest looks pretty strong

[Captain Tomar]

Yah, the castle is weak...and the "cracks" on his wings are more like veins which i have always intended to tone down when i colored the peice...just haven't gotten there yet and the bird-guy's eye is there, but isn't pained yet so you can see through to the grass background...and that's why it looks a bit wierd. Thanks for the comments!

[Qitsune]

The dragon's weight is on his bent leg, if you try to stand as he does, you will find it most uncomfortable. I like his head tho.

[Captain Tomar]

Thanks! Though i actually prefer to think that his weight is on his tail, but i hear what you are saying.