Still trying to rough out the edges. . .

[sneed]

Hi

I'm still trying to work on my comic book pages. . . with rendered pencils

Let me know what you think

sneed

:O :O :O

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a9/Inddy/cleopatra850.jpg

[madster]

Although lovely to look at, it is too subtle in tones to ever reproduce worth a damn. Are you really going through all that time and effort investment for a single, non-reproducable comic? How many more pages do you have to go?

~M

[Interceptor]

That'd be one of those comics I'd buy where I don't give a damn about the story.. because the gorgeous artwork is too distracting :)

[lexdan90]

that sounds traumatizing, only by looking at the page i feel intimidated. it looks nightmarish, some mayan-egyptian futuristic stuff twisted together. its a comic i would buy ^^

[jabberwookie]

it has a dreamy-fuzzy thing happening with it for me. like im looking at the images through a haze. im not sure what context these are in, and that may be the intention. if this has something to do with more visual communication, it kinda frustraites me a bit, cause i dont know what its saying.

but obviously some seriouse talent worked this. its pretty cool, but like i said, i dont understand whats being shown. if that makes any sense.

enough with the making of the words, im going back to drawing. :P

[Sems]

id buy it for the art defiently but id also like it to have a good story line

[sneed]

Although lovely to look at, it is too subtle in tones to ever reproduce worth a damn. Are you really going through all that time and effort investment for a single, non-reproducable comic? How many more pages do you have to go?

~M

Actually. . . It's a try-out page. . . I was given a story and asked to illuststrate a page. . .

Since there was no contract ( or money ) involved. . . I took the logical step and created a page based on mood. . .

That way. . . since the page is vague anyway. . . the page is all mine

I always get nervous when there are promises and no cash

Haven't heard from them yet. . . guess I flunked. . .

As for the tonal look. . . If the page is accepted. . . I would go to color


sneed

:blahblah: :blahblah:

[sneed]

That'd be one of those comics I'd buy where I don't give a damn about the story.. because the gorgeous artwork is too distracting :)

Thanx. . .

I rarely buy books because of story. . . I have always looked for the artist. . .

Except for Moore

Sneed

:$

[sneed]

that sounds traumatizing, only by looking at the page i feel intimidated. it looks nightmarish, some mayan-egyptian futuristic stuff twisted together. its a comic i would buy ^^

Thx. . . I wanted to do something alluring and disturbing

:blahblah:

[sneed]

it has a dreamy-fuzzy thing happening with it for me. like im looking at the images through a haze. im not sure what context these are in, and that may be the intention. if this has something to do with more visual communication, it kinda frustraites me a bit, cause i dont know what its saying.

but obviously some seriouse talent worked this. its pretty cool, but like i said, i dont understand whats being shown. if that makes any sense.

enough with the making of the words, im going back to drawing. :P

Thx. . . LIke I said. . . I would have concentrated on a story. . . once cash is laid on the table

:blahblah:

sneed

[sneed]

id buy it for the art defiently but id also like it to have a good story line

Thx. . . Like I said. . . " Cash on the table " " Cash on the table "

:yayca:

[jabberwookie]

ah ok, now that makes a little more sense to what im seeing then. gotcha!

hopefully you get the gig.

[sneed]

Thx. . . We see

sneed

>:{

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a9/Inddy/melinda.jpg

[sneed]

Here is a final page of a series called The Upper Hand

I'm still waiting on the lettering. . . But Scarlett and Elliot are coming out of the rain after a battle with a gang ( set in the twenties )

They have entered Elliot's office ( he's a private Detective ) and what do they find. . . .

:nohope:

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a9/Inddy/catss.jpg