hmmm... (new images...)

[fletchgirl]

finally got a new grip pen... (lost the old one:confused: )

anyway, i love the harry potter series (of books) and i'd like to do a take on them that isn't the movies' version. anyway, here's some heads of the three main characters (cartoony on purpose... but different than my flat stuff.) CnC welcome, needed
HARRY
http://www.members.aol.com/_ht_a/auuugghhhh/harry/harry1

RON
http://www.members.aol.com/_ht_a/auuugghhhh/harry/ron1

HERMIONE (i liked my sketches of her better, so i didn't finish her as much, i'll probably do another one later.
http://www.members.aol.com/_ht_a/auuugghhhh/harry/hermione1
more when i do em

[Fozzybar]

Nice, fletch!

The only crit is on the glasses. The reflections look blurry, as if the glas were clouded. You should use a shape with sharp edges and one transparency value...

[fletchgirl]

uh.... well, it's fog from all the awesome magic.:rolleyes: hahah. yeah, i wasn't sure how to approach those (the glasses).. what do you mean by shape with sharp edges exactly? :confused:
THANKS FOR THE HELP!!!

[Payback]

I think he means the brush.

[fletchgirl]

okay, i haven't gotten to hermione yet, but i changed harry's glasses a bit and ron's eyes because they were weirding me out. how bout now. C+C please, are there glasses better? i'm not sure.

http://www.members.aol.com/_ht_a/auuugghhhh/harry/harry2

http://www.members.aol.com/_ht_a/auuugghhhh/harry/ron2

[sin]

LOVE IT! heheheh they rock

[Blackwell]

Cool - nice stuff, fletchgirl -- I'm a fan of the books, and I really like these - Ron is my favorite. Also like your animal sketches on your site - I like your sketching style.

[Fozzybar]

Sorry flecth for the late response, but somehow i missed this post the last days...anyway here's what i meant with the glasses and i couldn't resist to push the overall image a little bit...i hope you don't mind, but somehow your pic attracted me to work with it...nice...

http://www.beyce.com/ca/pover/fletchgirl_harry2_fozzybar.jpg

Keep posting!

[fletchgirl]

sin-thanks :)
Blackwell- thanks also.. i'm glad to get a response from some one who likes the books, i really do love them, and that's what i'm going for...
i really need to work on that hermione... i've been putting it off... i did do a version of professor Mcgonagal as a cat.. don't know if i like it yet... (for those who haven't read the books, the cat is supposed to have mrkings on it's face that are just like the professor's eyeglasses..
http://www.members.aol.com/_ht_a/auuugghhhh/harry/mccat

fozzy-cool, i'll keep working on the glasses, i see what you're talking about now. feel free to mess with my hard, hard work whenever you feel like it. hahah. ;)

[Johannes]

Hi there
Nice work fletchgirl :) I especially like their expressions and the coloring and the cats fur - excellent fur *touches screen - yesss - furry!!!*! Good hair o the children too brw, thats a speciality of yours maybe?
The glasses seems to haunt ya. imho theyre getting better. I think however that maybe a simpler approach on the glasses could be good. The glare is overworked. Two brighter spots and a wavy line maybe - kinda comic classic glasses. They reflect the strong lights that are in the room. Maybe drawing a small "window" in the glasses is taking it to far, however, that I dont recommend. . But simple is the way to go here, I think.
On a side-note: Which kinda glasses does he have, potter I mean. If he cant see on long-range, then the glasses shrinks his features - eys and also his headline, because hes in 3/4. If he cant see on-short-range, then the glasses enlarges his eyes and features, lika e spectacle. :D
Have a nice weekend and thanx for your excellent comments on my darkelfgirl
:chug:

[fletchgirl]

i agree that in real life, glasses would shrink or enlarge the features.... it could work if i just pull his face in a little bit... funny that in the books, they can grow whole skeletons.. but even dumbledore wears glasses. :p i'll keep working on it...

[fletchgirl]

okay, i worked on harry some more....

http://www.members.aol.com/_ht_a/auuugghhhh/harry/harry3

and here's an attempt at snape.. i didn't want him to look like alan rickman... but for some reason, now he looks like a cross between Peter Cushing (Grand Moff Tarkin) and Elvis. hmmm.

http://www.members.aol.com/_ht_a/auuugghhhh/harry/snape

[Tedsuo]

Dude, I think Snape is the best so far! He looks like John Cusack saying "this is my impression of Peter Cushing... as Elvis."