Advanced Entertainment Design Class / Characters

[Giang79]

http://www.drawthrough.com/ftp/leninacweb.jpg

Illustration of Character from novel
Lenina Above

Jiz being chased by hornets on surface of asteriod
below

http://www.drawthrough.com/ftp/jiznewweb.jpg

[soupface]

giang79, these look good, but there's more to be done.

fin the first one, the character's body is kinda funny. her left arm (on right of image) seems short, and her legs, at the knees, are pointed in strange directions (for example: her feet are pointed out, while her knees are pointed in and her shins are... uh?)

on the second, there's a lack of detail. add more variation to the rock: perhaps different colours in places? your character could also use some more colours, all the steely-blue is kinda bland.

that being said, i really like your character's costume and facial expression in the first one. the dr. seuss-ian asteroid rock design is also cool. nice.

[Payback]

That leg on the girl is the only crit I have really... and it's really bugging me to be quite honest :D I'd like to go up to her and just pull that leg back into position. ;)

Following the line from the front of her kneecap down to the front of her foot, you see it twists. Looks really painful, which can probably be read from her facial expression. ;) Just kidding.

I really like the concept and the colors though.

[I.was.ink]

nice stuff, but as the others have said, the girl has some bit of tweaking. I can't wait to do stuff like this when I get into art center.

I like the concept of the second pic a lot, but there seems to be so many undefined edges, that so many things get a bit confusing. Also, a bit of contrast would really help! :)

Please post more.

[AmadorL]

I am woundering where you are taking these classes?