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Reilly
June 28th, 2005, 09:12 AM
Check it out and let me know what you think--
http://www.oddgodpress.com/reillybrown/color/art/missyk.jpg
--Reilly
Aly Fell
June 28th, 2005, 09:33 AM
Oooh! A girl with a sword... I like it! Lovely thighs! Perhaps her far arm is a bit straight, but like I care... :)
Mr. Visions
June 28th, 2005, 09:38 AM
Cool piece. I like your style, seeing your work in the past and now this one. The one crit I would have is that the way you have the face angled doesn't match the sunglasses. The lenses appear at a frontal view when she appears to be looking back at a 3/4's view (mostly the left lense). Also, I feel this piece could have more to it if she show more emotion ( a smile, a smirk, show some teeth, something). It would make me feel this character is actually in the middle of something or has a story behind her. Right now it's just a "woman with a sword". You have alot of nice elements in here though. Thanks for sharing your work again, always a pleasure to see.
- Visions
DSillustration
June 28th, 2005, 10:02 AM
i think the glare on her glasses takes away more than it adds.
Gilead
June 28th, 2005, 01:49 PM
Oh boy here we go again. Another hormone pumped guy drawing scantily clad babes with swords...
But enough about me let's talk about your picture. I like it. the drawing is clean and the composition works. I agree about the glare on the glasses, also there's too muck black in the palm of her right hand. Those lines need to be thinner so my eye doesn't keep getting pulled over there.
DUSK^
June 28th, 2005, 03:20 PM
great composition... I would like to see it a little tighter - the hair and hightlights mostly
Interceptor
June 29th, 2005, 12:47 PM
She's gorgeous, reilly.
I agree with everyone else as for crits.
ElvisMcVegas
June 30th, 2005, 12:02 AM
I think this would look a lot better if you added a more realistic texture to the katana
Reilly
June 30th, 2005, 09:10 AM
Thanks for all the comments, guys! I don't have time to respond to everyone individually, but some of have mentioned some really good points. I'll update the image when I get a chance!
--Reilly
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