TextureArtist seeks critique on character design.

[JamesCroley]

This is my first time posting at conceptart. I have a sketch for a character that will be used as a model in a new Unreal Tournament 2003 mod that I am working on with a friend. It is Freya: the norse goddess of war and fertility. please tell me what you think!!!!
http://www.jamescroleytextureartist.com/SketchesPage/FreyaSketch02.jpg

[Zeravla]

nice attention to detail, the legs look a little weak to support that big upper body, but other than that not bad

[Sketch]

Really cool ideas in this one. Love the pig. I agree about the legs... I think this concept would be much better if you kept the design of the legs but made them longer.

[ChaosEidolon]

yep...those are definately some fertile....err...pig

great design dude...very creative.

[Crunch]

hmm...the line work is nice and i love the detail. but the legs are real weak and it would def. look akward for that little of legs try putting more bulk at the base maybe not have that part by the knee go so far back it looks unbalanced kinda. also the caveman type statues of fertility had huge hips and a ghetto ass. you got the boobs down though. i love the bore though and it is real dark and seems very unreal tournament like good job.

[Android]

damn, I really really like the sketch, and the whole design of the character,

some of the countour detail lines especially around the hog head are flatening out the form a little but since this is a sketch for a 3d model than its not that important, you have a great imagination, good work

[The_Dude_Abidin]

that is a spiffy character design man, whoever came up with you guys theme is cool. ever think of doing one for loki.


The dude