Mike da Barbarian

[jorzac]

Pin-up of my character.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v250/mastinger/BARBARIAN.jpg

[dogfood]

This is very fun! That smoke going through his head is a little disconcerting, though, making it tough to figure out what's going on there.

[look]

Cute funny and confusing. I like the overall work, but it's hard to tell things apart from each other. Like I couldn't figure out what the girl's leaning against at first, and after close examination, I noticed there's rock behind her. Also the girl's head looks a tad large for her body. And it might be less confusing if you give more focus in the main characters and things in the foreground by giving them thicker outlines, and give thinner lines to other things.

[Mavrick71]

:404sign: I can't see it.

[Cbird]

Yeah me neither what the fudge. :thinking:

[jorzac]

Cute funny and confusing. I like the overall work, but it's hard to tell things apart from each other. Like I couldn't figure out what the girl's leaning against at first, and after close examination, I noticed there's rock behind her. Also the girl's head looks a tad large for her body. And it might be less confusing if you give more focus in the main characters and things in the foreground by giving them thicker outlines, and give thinner lines to other things.
Everything you say is on the money, tho the latter crits are more senseworthy for when i go finsh the piece, then the bolder outlines and detail come into play.
But, yea, that head.............. :tihi:

[Interceptor]

look pretty much summed up my crits. This is an adorable picture, though. I really want to see ir colored. I likenthe idea of a little pint-sized barbarian