C&C Needed

[Juice5942]

Well this is a sketch I did a while ago that I'm trying to color. The orginal sketch was based on a request from someone to show a captured female elf. I still need to make her look more tattered but I've got no idea how to color the hair really or if I'm even getting the lighting right. (It's supposed to be from the top.) I'm pretty far from finished, but any help is appreciated. Thanks.

http://www.ic.sunysb.edu/Stu/oihonvbe/Images/capturedelfwip.jpg

[Crunch]

the boobs are a little high...nice colour though. watch the placement of the head with the hair...cant put my finger on it but it looks kinda crooked.

[Juice5942]

Thanks for the reply.

Are the breasts too high? I was worried about putting them too low, maybe I overdid it..

[OLSEN]

heres a good tutorial on hair:

http://www.merekatcreations.com/html/tutorials/hairmain2.html

hope it helps..

[-=Rosie=-]

another nice hair tutorial can be found at

http://div.dyndns.org/EK/tutorial/hair/

I think at the moment she has a bit too much hair. The hair to the left of her body seems almost like a solid wall of hair, maybe let some of the background colour through there. Im also a little bit disappointed that hair is covering the majority of her face. Maybe have a thinner wisp of hair falling infront of the ear revealing a bit more face so we could see her lips or perhaps a few tears if she has been captured.

Stick at it and let us know how you get on.