torso thingy + Crotchless man

[talmir]

Just a drawing I did today. I am aware of a few mistakes but I'd like to hear your take on it..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v31/talmir/figures5.jpg

[jetpack42]

necks long, head looks a tad small.


looks like those bridgeman studies are paying off though.
-jose (silverslash posted with my name)

[mentler]

The Sternal Mastoid muscles in the neck are very prominent probably to much emphasis ~ once students fine out about this muscle they almost always overemphasize it.

Also highlights should be kept to a minimum ~ here again we think they look so good that more of them will look better ~~~ use them to take the viewer where you what his or her eye to go ~~~ when you use a lot of them the result is confusingly spotty~

There are two pieces of information that should make your next effort even better~

[talmir]

Jetpak : Thank you for your crits. I'll fix that next time :)

Mentler : Thank you for pointing these out to me. I will make another and post it here soon. Less and more thought out highlights and emphasise sternal mastoid less.. Check :)

[talmir]

Another try at anatomy...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v31/talmir/figures9.jpg