Blood on your FACE

[N.U.K.E.E]

Just some work for school, lemme know what you think :D

http://rustywidget.com/files/file_temp/concept_illustration02-11.jpg

http://rustywidget.com/files/file_temp/character-design01-01.jpg

http://rustywidget.com/files/file_temp/prop-design01-02.jpg

http://rustywidget.com/files/file_temp/character-design02-03.jpg

http://rustywidget.com/files/file_temp/set-design02-05.jpg

[Coma]

Crits:
1st pic: where is your light source coming from? the thin he is pointing the gun at?

I can't really tell what he is pointing the gun at, looks kinda like a guy with a small office trashcan on his head... though I doubt that's what you where going for.

There are some prospective issues with the gun. That cant be spelled out for you. study a book on prospective and building parallel objects.

I wouldn't use so much black as a dark tone.


4th pic:

I can't tell what it's head is.

I'd work on its anatomy a bit more, specifically its right arm.


5th pic:

The mans pose is really unnatural, I would think his hands would be resting more in between his legs than parallel with his legs.

The cars back tire looks out of prospective again, study the books.


OVER ALL: I'd try working in color before doing grey scales.

[tyboogie]

hey Nukee--your stuff is looking pretty solid-i lke the last one although the pose is stiff/innatural. but overall good stuff!-keep it up!!!---ty

[N.U.K.E.E]

thanx man, yeah the pose on the last one is pretty stiff, looks like he's sitting on the can or something :P I was more worried at the time about just getting him in perspective, I'll work on the gesture more next time :D