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riclov
June 3rd, 2005, 10:14 PM
A few figure sketches.
http://photos10.flickr.com/16989008_7aecf9a368.jpg
About an hour; prismacolor on Canson paper.
http://photos14.flickr.com/16989083_720dacba2a.jpg
25 minutes; charcoal heightened with white conte on kraft paper.
http://photos7.flickr.com/16989125_f35b842737.jpg
15 minutes; same materials as above. I like this one's direct, f-u attitude, even tho the hands are a tad beefy.
Crits welcomed. I'll post more soon.
Cheers,
Rick L
http://drawring.blogspot.com/
Dizon
June 3rd, 2005, 10:44 PM
I'm really impressed with the first 2! Although you could've done better with the last one even though it was for 15 minutes. The forms on the 1st one are great!
Where do u study ???
HunterKiller_
June 4th, 2005, 02:26 AM
Awesome drawings.
On the first one... i don't get what's going on with his er... 'area', i can make out two bumps... o.0
The second guys right thigh is too long? I don't know, maybe it's just me.
the_allejo05
June 5th, 2005, 04:43 PM
hey rick how are you..is alejandro..the guy from peru..I was in your illustration class...are you still doing the figure drawings on thurdays..?as always very fine work..i recognize anthony on the first figure drawing and remember when you did it hehe..
Ivan.R
June 5th, 2005, 04:59 PM
The first and the second are super, the third one is not so cool, but you spend only 15 min on it :rendered: I think that the hands (especially the thumb) of the man on the third picture are a bit bigger than they should be. Nice work anyway I also like that picture.
riclov
June 6th, 2005, 07:10 PM
Thanks for the comments. Yeah, I know the third one sux, but it was rushed and I still like the boldness of it.
Here are a few more...
http://photos9.flickr.com/16989232_f7fde99675.jpg
about 30 minutes; some foreshortening issues, but the proportions aren't too far off.
http://photos12.flickr.com/16989027_eb5d520bbf.jpg
about 30 minutes
http://photos11.flickr.com/16989062_8acfb6e092.jpg
about 25 minutes; I know this guy's thighs look too long, but his limbs are extremely elongated, and he's a very wiry 6'4' or thereabouts.
Dizon
June 7th, 2005, 12:28 AM
Another good set of life drawings!~
My only bug is the 2nd drawing. I have a question though cuz some part of me thinks you had the right proportions down on this one, it's just that it makes the illusion that it's off proportionally. I clearly see the hint of the spine going downwards towards the buttocks. But i think the (I dont know how to say this properly so forgive me!) line separating the cheeks should be seen. Just a hint of it will do. Good line quality BTW!
the_allejo05
June 7th, 2005, 11:27 AM
rick.. I love the first one...contour is very clean..and sure..
2nd one..the part below the armpit is kinda confusing..is that her breast..?;)
3rd is nice..i recall that model..he is very slender..
i just started my first nude in oil..did a monocrhome..next week i'll do the color and post it..so you tell me what you think..
clogik
June 7th, 2005, 12:03 PM
good stuff. i like the first one with the two models laying down. very clean and solid contour lines.
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