Facial Anatomy Draw

[HunterKiller_]

Ok, here's a random face i did out of my head. Strangly, it some what resembles me, maybe because i was feeling around my own face for some reference, lol.
No, i'm not very good at life drawing as you can see, so please critique and i would greatly appreciate a draw over if it's way off.
I found the lips really hard, and yes the eyes look... just weird...

EDIT: Opps, forgot the picture :rolleyes:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v465/HunterKiller_/My%20Pictures/Face1.jpg

EDIT2: It's not finished btw.

[Uziel]

Eyes are too big, lips too small,.......
There is so much to crit.
I would suggest a bit of reference drawing before doing it from the mind.
Try to get proportions right.

[HunterKiller_]

Oh... I had no idea... :nohope:
Guess i'm worse than i thought... *sigh*
Would someone kindly do a draw over for me pretty please? Thanks alot.

[Uziel]

You make it sound like you want us to make your homework?

[the_allejo05]

hmm well take a picture of yourself and compare side by side..you can see your errors ;)

[glikster]

ok, get a picture of a person's face, or a mirror. Use it as reference.
Try to get the form of the face and head before you start details. You didn't really draw the nose yet, yet you tried to completely render eyes.
Also, as a tipand I used to make the same mistake, don't just do the head shape and stick the feacial features shapes on top of the head shape. The head/face is a unified whole that has to be drawn that way - each feature is inherently part of the face and head and the whole thing is interconnected in 3-d space. Try to remember that.

[egerie]

I guess hearing that you need to draw from life 3 times wasn't enough.

Now get serious by clicking here (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=14119)

and then here when you're done (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=14735)

[glikster]

wow, egerie, I never saw those before! Thanks for the links!!

[HunterKiller_]

Sorry egerie :bashful:. I saw those two threads before, they look pretty hard, but i'll give it a go and post them here.
I feel so out of place on this forum cuz' everyone else are like pros... and i'm like... neon n00b, haha.
Thanks for the help, much appreciated.

EDIT:
Here it is! Whew that was hard work. Hope this is ok.
I did the face from the second link cuz' the pictures in the first one stopped loading half way.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v465/HunterKiller_/My%20Pictures/tutorial_face1.jpg

[Uziel]

Much better than the first one don't you agree?
one of mine -> http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?p=496995#post496995