Marvel Pinup

[kong]

MARVEL PINUP
http://kong.5u.com/images/sketches/may1/marvel.gif

[stoph]

nice! get some colours on it now, and thats an order! :yayca: the linework is great, very crisp and clean. only thing i suggest is that you move Wolverine more to the right, hes too close to the left edge for my liking.

[michaelkatchan]

aye im with 'stoph on this one, looking forward to seeing a colored variant of this *nods* =D and the linework is very cool indeed

[JERI]

what's that stuff at the background?

[Nolp]

Wow, this is great. I'm going to have to agree with everyone else and say i'd love to see this coloured. Keep up the good work.


Nolp

[look]

Um, seems I'll be the odd ball here, hope I won't get bashed by everyone else.
The composition is not very strong, it's all over the place, I cannot decide what to focus on. And it seems the three characters are just thrown together, instead of working around with each other.
I don't know which character the big guy in the lower right corner is, it could be the original design, but I find the face to be too wide, and eyes a bit far apart..

[Interceptor]

I have to agree with look. I with my biggest problem is Wolverine's pose. He looks very timid, in a way. Wolverine sound be like, lunging at you or something.. but here he looks like he's doign a Shoryuuken for the first time. Don't get me wrong, it's not a terrible picture. There's just a few things that need to be worked on.

[Elwell]

The linework is strong. The drawing is iffy. The composition is nonexistant.
Yummy frosting, no cake.

[FunkyFresh]

yes, the composition really is all over the place. I'd suggest getting wolverine to the right a bit more. and something about his face is also strange... I would also agree that the eyes are too far apart, but it's probably just that style, and it would show how wide he really is.
-fresh