Flaming Death Moth Woman Thing

[Eriboss]

this started off as todays DSG, but I kinda liked the idea of it so ive been playin with it some more,
any suggestions \ comments ? does it need a background ? where does it lie on the "sketchy" vs "finished" swingometer? etc etc

http://www.reelfilms.co.uk/images/mothnewbig.jpg
the woman:
http://www.reelfilms.co.uk/images/mothnewsmall.jpg

[Andy DV]

i would definately do a backgroudn, or at least perhaps add some illumination to the areas surrounding the light and the flames. i would also like to see the same quality of line added to the wings and the flames that are present on the figure and the moth body. maybe youre just going for motion and thats okay, but i like the definition you have with the body and the figure and would like to see it on everything.

[Eriboss]

Andy DV - thanks, yeah I think it does need something for the BG, i will ry out some slight illumination maybe. And yeah, the wings and flames do need work too, cheers :)