Immortalized(2)

[Madfly]

ok folks well the first one i did never came out too well.. so i decided to do it over and well..heres what i have so far.. the art teacher the school says her only complaint for now is the right eye.. which is a bit too high up.. other than that.. ..another comment she made as that i made the bridge of the nose a little too wide but anyway it has a resemblances to me none the less:-) (which i might add is a big step up from the previous one i did) anywho how do u ppl think ?:-) (NO THATS NOT A SPOON ON HIS RIGHT SHOULDER )>:{ lol

http://uploads4me.com/userfiles/sketchbook/immortalizedalmostfinished.jpg


I WILL SURPASS DA VINCI..EVEN IF IT TAKES ME A LIFE TIME!! >:{

[Madfly]

anybody at all? want to leave a comment? :\

[Madfly]

ah come on..theres got to be at least ONE comment :P

[stoph]

i can hardly see any difference from the original. as i have seen youre face before, im still not seeing much resemblance, sorry. the mistakes you made in the first are almost all still there in your second. im thinking your biggest gripe is the 3/4 view. perhaps if you started again but from a front on view. walk before you can run. the skill is there, it just needs to be honed a little.

[Madfly]

:^^;: damn it.. lol yeah i kno my teacher told me i was repeating that wide nose bridge error AGAIN lol... and the thingys above the lips are a bit too wide aswell..but there just isnt enough time to START OVER for the 2nd time..cuz i really really really need to finish this portfolio..either that or consider leaving early next year. :^^;: but i guess it can stay for now there will always be MORE PIECES I CAN USE TO REDEEM MYSELF :P