Fighter

[BlackBastet]

http://www.bastet.net.ru/gallery/fighter.jpg

[Danilo]

Look at some references. Light does not describe form so well.

[look]

It looks nice. The background could use more work, those streaks in the back just doesn't work with the character right. If you want to go for smoke, then make more smokes and less distinct lines in the bg. The arm appears a tad odd to me, can't exactly point out why, maybe it's the lack of curving in the upper arm make it hard to tell where the elbow is? The legs are too long.

[BlackBastet]

Thank you for crits and comments :)