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escortle
March 13th, 2003, 10:50 PM
it should work

http://www.deviantart.com/view/1461865
Crunch
March 16th, 2003, 09:07 PM
not too bad. your best bet would be to work on your neatness even if it is a sketch....line quality too. go from thick to thin to add weight and hint at shadow..
Vader
March 17th, 2003, 07:32 AM
Cool pics, i have to agree with crunch about adding weight.