Abyss

[OLSEN]

A piece im currently stuck with, any feedback is appreciated. Ive been looking at it for too long to know what to do with it..

http://medlem.spray.se/ksmolsen/hpbimg/wateprobesmall.jpg


cheers.

[dindon]

well since its deep ocean you might want to include a few deep-sea like fish swimming here and there. also maybe replaced the purple you have in the pic with a more blue/turquoise color.

and maybe the sub should be discovering something on the ocean floor, like strange bones, or a sunken ship/submarine.

perhaps include some of those heat vents that they find on the ocean floor.

those were the ideas i could think of. i hope that helps :)

[drewantarctic]

its important to show us what the search is for. put something interesting on the ground, even if its shape is ambiguous. i think that the light could use a bit more fog on its way down to the ground. its legs should also have more light on them. should be a sharp contrast to keep our eye downwards. and also the machines underside needs more light becuase thats where the light will be reflected.

[OLSEN]

cheers, ill try your ideas and post a finished version when its done. =)