crap crap crap

[John Doe Humpface]

wanted to get a little feedback on a couple of old paintings
both acrylic and mixed media (non-digital)
http://www.liquidbiscuit.com/painting/buttsunday.jpg


http://www.liquidbiscuit.com/painting/woman.jpg

[Fozzybar]

I like the first one...and this is just my personal thought: I don't know why, but i would prefer to use deep black somewhere in this pic...it just would please me :p

[Lono]

is this some sort of a trick designed to ensnare the uneducated?

im also wondering if this crowd is really the proper firing squad for your partictular style?
a very large percentage of the people here find pleasure in drawing robots, monsters, and vikings.

i really dont want to suck your dick so here are some worthless critiques.

the first one is interesting... all it really lacks "in my opinion" is a monkey,,, wearing a jetpack..

the second one is a tough one... hmmmmm. maby if you gave her a broad sword in her right hand,, and a severed head in her left? i think that would really tie the whole thing together.

:chug:

-Lono

[John Doe Humpface]

thanks for the comments, i'm actually at a transitional stage in my style and am learning as much as i can from everyone here. these pieces are a little old but nonetheless i respect your comments

though if you don't like these, you'll really be pissed when i post my new paintings

[mcotie]

:bow: Lono!!