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A.M.
May 18th, 2005, 11:01 AM
Hey all, been lurking around here for a while, but havent posted alot.
Thought id open my own sketchsbook to keep track on my progress.
C&C is off course more then welcome so fire away, no mercy ;)

http://members.lycos.nl/forgedpencil/Sketches2/1.jpg

http://members.lycos.nl/forgedpencil/Sketches2/2.jpg

http://members.lycos.nl/forgedpencil/Sketches2/3.jpg

http://members.lycos.nl/forgedpencil/Sketches2/4.jpg

http://members.lycos.nl/forgedpencil/Sketches2/5.jpg

http://members.lycos.nl/forgedpencil/Sketches2/6.jpg

http://members.lycos.nl/forgedpencil/Sketches2/7.jpg

http://members.lycos.nl/forgedpencil/Sketches2/8.jpg

http://members.lycos.nl/forgedpencil/Sketches2/9.jpg

http://members.lycos.nl/forgedpencil/Sketches2/Wormding.jpg

http://members.lycos.nl/forgedpencil/Sketches2/Sketch_1.jpg

http://members.lycos.nl/forgedpencil/Sketches2/Sketch_2.jpg
KhenU
May 18th, 2005, 11:08 AM
hey nice stuff...u r a talented man
for a second i thought i knew one of ur nude models :)
i like the blue ball-pen drawings best...cool compositions...
keep goin
flippinmental
May 18th, 2005, 11:17 AM
hi, you've got some great pictures here! I really like them.
One thing that i noticed is that in some of the life drawings (are they life drawings? I assume they are) of the man on a chair and the one after that of the women, the width of there shoulders seems too small compared to there head.
Either way these are great - keep it up!
Ivan.R
May 18th, 2005, 12:36 PM
Very nice! But I found the skull out of proportion. Your chin is too long.
http://img72.echo.cx/img72/2303/61ge.jpg
http://img72.echo.cx/img72/7475/skullfront0bt.jpg

I hope that this will help you!
Just keep drawing!
IanE
May 18th, 2005, 01:18 PM
Very good drawings, good angles and poses, too. I noticed that you place your eyes rather far apart, which has a really cool styled look to your characters, but too much makes them look fishy. As with the skull critique that Ivan gave you, the skull is also 5 'eye-widths' wide, so you should be able to fit an eye-width between the actual eyes, and have room on each side for one more width.

Keep the posts coming! Good work.

Ian