space station of sparta

[Stahr]

This is an illustration 'im working on, but 'im stuck and don't really know how to take the imagery further, any tip?

I have began trying some details in the lower right corner, but I don't really think it fits with the overall image.


http://k.domaindlx.com/trollsang/station_of_sparta.jpg

[Flaskpost]

Looking great so far!
En horisont-linje skulle sitta fint. Kanske lite annat färgschema på rymdstationen, för att bryta lite mot himlen. :yayca:

[Stahr]

thanks for the comment!
I'm not gonna follow you by writing in swedish though, so everyone understands ;)
but an horizont line may do something for the picture, I might go for a try at that.
and , I got an update on this, need much more work on the sky I think.

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b133/failoniir/stationofsparta4-2.jpg

I know it's quite dull in the color, I might do some experiment with selections and tuning the colors a bit, just for a look.

[Serpian]

oh, but I like the way there is no horizon, it makes the whole scene so.. foggy.. Or dusty? Which goes well with the
red-orange-possibly-polluted-to-death-sky you've got there.. I like the way the the blue lights contrast to the orange of the rest of the image...

[madster]

I like your latest revision.

Stop being hesitant, and give this thing a horizon line and a definitive Light Source. If it doesn't work out, oh well, you'll move on wiser from the effort...

I like the lighting in the buildings. I like the impression of a seaside enclave.

Do some concrete stablizing of your central elements now.

~M

[Stahr]

hm, I didn't think about it as a kind of harbour, my idéa was a kind of a station in the air.

here's my update though:

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b133/failoniir/stationofspartab3.jpg