Assasin

[robikillborn]

Hi

This picture has a little story behind it but to cut it short is`t about destiny.
I used a ref pic of one of my friends for the girl and changed her costume and background of course ;) Her face remained, i only aded diferent shadows and lights. I`m not to sure about the wall from her left, tough. Should i remove it or leave it? Any crits are most welcome and thanks for your time.

http://tinypic.com/4zuahj

[jfwalls]

Her arms look too long, and her fingers on the left hand are waaay too long. I would also bring some darker values into her clothing

[vcoleman]

the wall helps balance the composition so keep it in, but it and a lot of the rest of the piece needs to be refined more. The girl's anatomy is too distorted, ie: the torso is too short, and arms/fingers are too long.

[-Max Bertolini-]

I agree with the comments above, take more care of anatomy and your art will improve so much.

- Max

[lwjacob]

Hey man, keep it the way it is now! It's very well done. Congratulations!

[!-wow]

Need to be more careful with details and materials -water is now water, skin is not skin and so on. If you take out of the context, can't recognize any material.And anatomy...also I want to see some ferm lines, is too soft. The wall is good there but the black elements are disturbing, instead to lead to the face, the eye is attracted by them....better put the red color in the hair....
Is nice, isn't much to work, just small details. I would like to be killed by such a creature :x

[!-wow]

Look, I made some small changes- modify the pelvis position to be more sexy and crop the wall& estompate the dark objects from the background. Don't know if is the best solution, is just my point of view. I don't have experience with Photoshop, and I realise now that is much more easy to talk than fix the problems- I mean the materiality of the objects.

http://www.adrian-borda.com/conceptart/killborn_asasin.jpg

[sodomizer]

I like the repaint !-wow. I also looked at your website, very nice stuff on there... Very surreal. /m\

[robikillborn]

thanx alot guys for your amazing help! I see now your coments about the anatomy and i realise that you are absolutely right. things have to be fixed here and FAST! :)

really nice repaint i-wow and thanks for you time.
"If you take out of the context, can't recognize any material" - i never tought of it this way, realy helping remark here ;)

I will fix this and post it again

bye

[dogfood]

I haven't noticed anyone else mention this (being a poor reader), but it seems like we're missing a lot of abdoman.

Amazing repaint, !-wow.