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BolognaGenocide
May 6th, 2005, 06:38 PM
Here are some drawings, digital paintings, etc. I'd love some critiques. Feel free to bash it.

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y120/BolognaGenocide/warriorladycopy.gif
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y120/BolognaGenocide/BIRDIES4copy.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y120/BolognaGenocide/hutfinaltonecopy.gif
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y120/BolognaGenocide/bargefinalcopy.gif
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y120/BolognaGenocide/carnivorousplantscopy.gif
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y120/BolognaGenocide/linework.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y120/BolognaGenocide/naix.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y120/BolognaGenocide/pendako12_26_04.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y120/BolognaGenocide/seashipscopy.gif
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y120/BolognaGenocide/magicladyandknightcopy.gif
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y120/BolognaGenocide/industrialtonecopy.gif
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y120/BolognaGenocide/cartpaint.jpg


Thanks for taking a look.
Skulldog
May 6th, 2005, 06:45 PM
Only thing that jumps at me, is the eyes on the first female. They just seem a bit off with the jawline, and with the tiny pencil rendering, a bit creepy.

Otherwise, awesome stuff. I love the bird bugs and their nest.
BMunchausen
May 6th, 2005, 07:06 PM
Yes, I'd agree with Skulldog about the eyes on the first woman. I sense anatomy issues on the later woman with the headdress too - the 3/4's profile isn't *quite* working. I think the first woman's right eye (her right) gets muddled in the hair. She has sort of a blank look, like a zombie. Maybe you meant to do that?

I love your architectural work and your ships. Very clean and clear. I envy you since I'm bumbling through that kind of thing right now!
dogfood
May 7th, 2005, 04:23 PM
These are stupendous. There is a lot of great line quality and the weight of things is well represented. Lovely flow and great energy. Top notch.
sodomizer
May 7th, 2005, 04:54 PM
The monster before you colored it looked super fucken dope, I think the coloring could have used some more time. keep it up, i'd like to see some more. :)