disco fantasy

[Gilead]

I was going for that 1970's disco psychodelica type of image, Like Esteban Moroto's Conan illustrations or something.
pen and ink 9"x12"
http://members.cox.net/gilead/babe031.jpg

[black_fish]

I think it's very nice. The 70's influence is a good idea, love that kind of art. The only two things I'd say her right hand is a bit big and not very delicate, and I wouldn't do any shading on the character: those little paralel lines do not give any feeling for the form and they kind of dirty up what could be a very nice clean design (ala Adam Hughes for example).

[zeroe]

im agreeing with black_fish on the shading, it does look a tad messy. anyways should you decide to "clean" it up, then i reckon your lines could use some more weight. and you should definitely color this, flat vibrant colors would do wonders!