Help!!

[zueron]

my classmate ask me to draw a sketch of her sister and I dont feel like Im doing a good work here's a rough sketch and a picture of her sister PLS. help me and tell me what to change to make my sketch a bit acceptable....thank you
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y84/norze/sketch/a005.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y84/norze/sketch/a006.jpg

[Limo]

I think you're pretty much on the right way, keep it up!
Is it gonna be a cartoon styled image ( the body ) ??

[stoph]

its a pretty sharp likeness, but you may want to do some things...

1. widen her forehead. not by much.
2. a little more spacing between the eyebrows.
3. put darker linework on the left nostril to even things out.
4. work on the ears. they arent symetrical so dont draw them as if they are.
5. plump out the nose a little.

the key here is to employ these changes only very slightly. too much and itll look even less like her. as i said, great likeness so far. these things will make it even more recognisable.